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9/14/2003 c1 Bookstick
I think that you are on the right track. Showing how Ranma learns a new technique is interesting. I don't expect Ranma to become god-like, still I would not be the one who takes him on in a fight. Please keep up the good work and post more.
9/14/2003 c1 the verve
hey!

you have to do more of this story, it's turnng out to be very intresting!

I like it, it's easy to read and does not have a clieche story line!
9/14/2003 c1 2Resurrector of the Dead
This is good!

Can't wait for next cp.

Ranechi
9/14/2003 c1 11Fusion Blaster
That ws better than I was expecting. This was obviously just set up for what is to come. Hopefully this personal training of his might lead to the boy doing some much needed growing up.

I eagerly await the next chapter.
9/14/2003 c1 3WarpWizard
Cool! I, for one, like training fics.

You're right, one of the main traps in writing one is making Ranma godlike far too quickly.

Enjoy exploring the different ideas about manouvres and don't feel the need to rush, and maybe you can write a nice, long, interesting fic.

I'll be watching.
9/14/2003 c1 12Ghost in the Machine
I've always felt one of the biggest differences between character development and giving out power-ups is showing effort.

However, it is not enough for Ranma to develop all these manga/anime based techniques. At some point, he'll have to have a USE for all this stuff.

I look forward to finding out what that is.
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