for Uncharted Territory6/14/2008 c1 HC
UPDATE please :D
UPDATE please :D
5/7/2008 c1 
1TheRndom1
this was fantastic! very original, I like the thought of it.
at fist I was like 'whot? why would he not clean him?' but you its ok now tham I'm done XD
I hope there will be more
*thows cookies at you* Go on! they are very good!
1TheRndom1this was fantastic! very original, I like the thought of it.
at fist I was like 'whot? why would he not clean him?' but you its ok now tham I'm done XD
I hope there will be more
*thows cookies at you* Go on! they are very good!
4/13/2008 c1 anne
this looks really good so far. i cant wait to read the next chapters.
this looks really good so far. i cant wait to read the next chapters.
4/10/2008 c1 A New Fan
Um ... I'm not sure you know this but ... someone stole the rest of your story. I can't seem to find it anywhere on your page? Should we report them?
No?
Oh. You haven't finished writing it yet?
THEN GET TO IT! I'M DYING OF ANTICIPATION HERE!
It is really a great story by the way. Nice Work.
Um ... I'm not sure you know this but ... someone stole the rest of your story. I can't seem to find it anywhere on your page? Should we report them?
No?
Oh. You haven't finished writing it yet?
THEN GET TO IT! I'M DYING OF ANTICIPATION HERE!
It is really a great story by the way. Nice Work.
4/5/2008 c1 2TheMysticalOne
More! More definately more! Very well written and I love how you have portrayed their personalities. I would really look forward to an update and a little fluffiness! Can't wait!
2TheMysticalOneMore! More definately more! Very well written and I love how you have portrayed their personalities. I would really look forward to an update and a little fluffiness! Can't wait!
3/27/2008 c1 rugby-chick
omg! i LOVE this! its completley brilliant! its absolutely positivley spectacularly amazingly wonderful! and im gonna stop there cause i ran out of words..lol..i hope you post another part soon! im really looking forward to it! i cant wait for more!
omg! i LOVE this! its completley brilliant! its absolutely positivley spectacularly amazingly wonderful! and im gonna stop there cause i ran out of words..lol..i hope you post another part soon! im really looking forward to it! i cant wait for more!
2/21/2008 c1 ann
this story is very good so far. i really want to read chapter two. i like what roles you have put the characters in.
this story is very good so far. i really want to read chapter two. i like what roles you have put the characters in.
2/19/2008 c1 Aubergine 28
Erm, saw the message on your profile but just noting that I've read Part One, hope for a Part Two and have this on my alert list. No pressure, just an acknowledgement.
-Penguin Girl
Erm, saw the message on your profile but just noting that I've read Part One, hope for a Part Two and have this on my alert list. No pressure, just an acknowledgement.
-Penguin Girl
12/28/2007 c1 2Fire Tempest
This is really good, are you planning on continuing or have you given up? I hope you continue!
2Fire TempestThis is really good, are you planning on continuing or have you given up? I hope you continue!
11/27/2007 c1 3fireproof potatoes
Hey, that story was great. I was wondering, though, are you going to write more?
3fireproof potatoesHey, that story was great. I was wondering, though, are you going to write more?
11/15/2007 c1 chacha
Okay, so..still getting reviews after 4 years? I think that says something babe, and it's definitely not common at all. I mean, 365 reviews for ONE FRIGGIN' CHAPTER? HELLO? Do you need more of a sign than THAT to tell you that it's GOD'S WILL?
The truth is, i think it's about time for you to !SURPRISE! update, with super-major-author-ness and we're all like, "WOAH DAMN this bee-yotch is GOD!" And then we all worship your amazing writing and updating skills and heckle Draco and Harry into doing whatever you want them to. On tape. I volunteer to be present. Seriously.
And that might have made me sound like a psycho, but I think I'm just a bit wired because I've been running off of coffee for two days straight?
But (Serious review)
This is a very interesting story line, definitely unique, which is not common in H/D fics (In fact, that's why i don't often read them). Yours are all this way, and they definitely hook me in more than most other stories. I have actually read them multiple times...
I know you're probably moved on from this stage and have other things going for you by now...We all change like that, but I thought I should let you know that you have a very promising beginning to a story here and maybe you shouldn't pass it up...
pretty please dont?
Okay, so..still getting reviews after 4 years? I think that says something babe, and it's definitely not common at all. I mean, 365 reviews for ONE FRIGGIN' CHAPTER? HELLO? Do you need more of a sign than THAT to tell you that it's GOD'S WILL?
The truth is, i think it's about time for you to !SURPRISE! update, with super-major-author-ness and we're all like, "WOAH DAMN this bee-yotch is GOD!" And then we all worship your amazing writing and updating skills and heckle Draco and Harry into doing whatever you want them to. On tape. I volunteer to be present. Seriously.
And that might have made me sound like a psycho, but I think I'm just a bit wired because I've been running off of coffee for two days straight?
But (Serious review)
This is a very interesting story line, definitely unique, which is not common in H/D fics (In fact, that's why i don't often read them). Yours are all this way, and they definitely hook me in more than most other stories. I have actually read them multiple times...
I know you're probably moved on from this stage and have other things going for you by now...We all change like that, but I thought I should let you know that you have a very promising beginning to a story here and maybe you shouldn't pass it up...
pretty please dont?
11/2/2007 c1 Charlotte
that was really good! best fanfiction ive ever read! please update soon?
that was really good! best fanfiction ive ever read! please update soon?
8/16/2007 c1 Dreaming in blue
are you still planning on continuing the story? i read this chapter back in 04, and i really liked it :)
are you still planning on continuing the story? i read this chapter back in 04, and i really liked it :)