7/1/2013 c13 20destinationmirkwood
Easily one of the best LOTR fic I've read on this site. Heart wrenching, chilling, suspenseful, but rewarding. It's awesome. Beautiful job.
Easily one of the best LOTR fic I've read on this site. Heart wrenching, chilling, suspenseful, but rewarding. It's awesome. Beautiful job.
3/20/2010 c11 tvguide247
I really enjoy your story; you have obviously put a lot of work and time into creating it. There are however some spelling and grammatical errors as well as some sentences that simply don't make sense.
For example;"Suddenly, a harsh, but refreshing wind him in the face, and ran tendrils or his blood-matted hair"
Remember to carefully edit your work before posting.
Overall good work. Please post another story soon!
I really enjoy your story; you have obviously put a lot of work and time into creating it. There are however some spelling and grammatical errors as well as some sentences that simply don't make sense.
For example;"Suddenly, a harsh, but refreshing wind him in the face, and ran tendrils or his blood-matted hair"
Remember to carefully edit your work before posting.
Overall good work. Please post another story soon!
2/10/2005 c13 4JT
Hey Earelwen! See, I told you that I would finish reading your story, one day! Well, I have now...proud of me? Anyway, it's amazing, but as I'm not one of the multitude of regular angst readers, too sad for my liking. (Although the ending is beautifully happy, albeit sort of bittersweet!) Still, sadness cannot take away from the brilliance of the writing, miss A star! Lol, 4J&T
Hey Earelwen! See, I told you that I would finish reading your story, one day! Well, I have now...proud of me? Anyway, it's amazing, but as I'm not one of the multitude of regular angst readers, too sad for my liking. (Although the ending is beautifully happy, albeit sort of bittersweet!) Still, sadness cannot take away from the brilliance of the writing, miss A star! Lol, 4J&T
11/6/2004 c10 11Firefly Knights
Sophia: You hurt my Leggy!
Kemi: *yawn* tiredness...
Sophia: You're just lucky he's still alive! You blamed Merry and drowned Pippin! How could you even dare! EVIL!
Kemi: ...You haven't even read the whole thing...
Sophia: You hurt my Leggy!
Kemi: *yawn* tiredness...
Sophia: You're just lucky he's still alive! You blamed Merry and drowned Pippin! How could you even dare! EVIL!
Kemi: ...You haven't even read the whole thing...
9/14/2004 c13 17SirNotAppearingInThisFilm
(starts crying) THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I was touched! I loved this story! And I'm so glad that you ended this on a happy note instead of Merry dying! OMG, That was so good! By the Valar! You are an awesome writer! I love the little flashbacks between him and Pippin! This was so good! And I liked The part with Aragorn calling him back! I always wondered what that would look like! I could go on for hours about how awesome it was! But unfortunately, I can't because my mom will kick me off soon! It was so good, though! :)
Namaarie for now, Mellon nin! :)
SNAITF
(starts crying) THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I was touched! I loved this story! And I'm so glad that you ended this on a happy note instead of Merry dying! OMG, That was so good! By the Valar! You are an awesome writer! I love the little flashbacks between him and Pippin! This was so good! And I liked The part with Aragorn calling him back! I always wondered what that would look like! I could go on for hours about how awesome it was! But unfortunately, I can't because my mom will kick me off soon! It was so good, though! :)
Namaarie for now, Mellon nin! :)
SNAITF
8/17/2004 c13 Mystarri
I like this a lot! Can't wait to read your next fic!
I like this a lot! Can't wait to read your next fic!
8/2/2004 c13 Heather
I'm a bit late on the uptake, but OMG I loved this story! There's a lack of good hobbit angst out there. Does that make me demented? *lol* No, seriously, my mom thinks I'm gonna marry a murderer 'cause I always think actors look hottest right before they kill someone. Yeah... Anyway, this story rocked, and I can't wait to hear more from you!
I'm a bit late on the uptake, but OMG I loved this story! There's a lack of good hobbit angst out there. Does that make me demented? *lol* No, seriously, my mom thinks I'm gonna marry a murderer 'cause I always think actors look hottest right before they kill someone. Yeah... Anyway, this story rocked, and I can't wait to hear more from you!
7/30/2004 c13 Hollystarr
This was one of the greatest fics I've ever written, no lie. I can't wait to read your Harry Potter one! Yay! I've recomended this to all my friends, and they all loved it! Great job! =)!
This was one of the greatest fics I've ever written, no lie. I can't wait to read your Harry Potter one! Yay! I've recomended this to all my friends, and they all loved it! Great job! =)!