
11/1/2003 c3 Guest
New chapter? Please...
New chapter? Please...
10/19/2003 c3
10Samwise the Strong
I hope Pippin isn't really dead. I wouldn't kill him. Ur gonna have a gaggle of Pip fans after ya, and they can be just as bad as the Leggy faans. Oh well. We liked Dom beter anyway.

I hope Pippin isn't really dead. I wouldn't kill him. Ur gonna have a gaggle of Pip fans after ya, and they can be just as bad as the Leggy faans. Oh well. We liked Dom beter anyway.
10/19/2003 c1 Samwise the Strong
This is a great first chapter to a story that I am sure is really great. Love it. If you enjoy writing fan fic come check out mt group where I have my story posted and several other ff.net LOTR writers are members. groups.yahoo.com/groups/peopleoftolkien, we'd love to have you.
This is a great first chapter to a story that I am sure is really great. Love it. If you enjoy writing fan fic come check out mt group where I have my story posted and several other ff.net LOTR writers are members. groups.yahoo.com/groups/peopleoftolkien, we'd love to have you.
10/13/2003 c1 Ruinwen
Earelwen
Don't you dare kill any hobbits. You know who i mean. But seen as you are such a very good writer i might allow it. Keep it up and update soon! :0)
Earelwen
Don't you dare kill any hobbits. You know who i mean. But seen as you are such a very good writer i might allow it. Keep it up and update soon! :0)
10/12/2003 c1 4JT
Earelwen, I told you I'd read it! Earelwen is one of my friends and this story is so good, but you should read some of her other stuff! I can't believe all the detail and names you got from LOTR, or did you make some of it up? Then again, I'm not an authority to know as I'm not a passionate fan - comparatively! PLEASE read more of Earelwen's stuff when it comes out! 4J&T
Earelwen, I told you I'd read it! Earelwen is one of my friends and this story is so good, but you should read some of her other stuff! I can't believe all the detail and names you got from LOTR, or did you make some of it up? Then again, I'm not an authority to know as I'm not a passionate fan - comparatively! PLEASE read more of Earelwen's stuff when it comes out! 4J&T
9/30/2003 c3
3Master Frodo Baggins
Wow! Great story! Its almost like Tolkien himself! But PLEASE make Pip come back! That would be way too sad if he didn't. :( Oh and try to keep it PG-13 so I'll still read it, ok?

Wow! Great story! Its almost like Tolkien himself! But PLEASE make Pip come back! That would be way too sad if he didn't. :( Oh and try to keep it PG-13 so I'll still read it, ok?
9/30/2003 c3
4little-took-lassie3
No...Pippin can't die! He's still alive, right? I mean... you wouldn't kill the lad would you? Please let him wash up on the river banks still alive or... make it a dream or... anything! Don't kill him!
Anyway, this is pretty good! Your first fic, huh? Very nice job so far. I would love to read more.

No...Pippin can't die! He's still alive, right? I mean... you wouldn't kill the lad would you? Please let him wash up on the river banks still alive or... make it a dream or... anything! Don't kill him!
Anyway, this is pretty good! Your first fic, huh? Very nice job so far. I would love to read more.
9/30/2003 c3
5Pip Fraggle
Oh cool! For some reason I really like these kind of stories. Please keep writing it. And please don't let Pippin die! You can't let him die!

Oh cool! For some reason I really like these kind of stories. Please keep writing it. And please don't let Pippin die! You can't let him die!
9/30/2003 c3
10cagedphoenix
hey, cool story.
you might want to work on the spacing and stuff, though.
other than that, though, it's pretty good, especially for a first try.
I'll keep watching out for it.
Keep at it:).

hey, cool story.
you might want to work on the spacing and stuff, though.
other than that, though, it's pretty good, especially for a first try.
I'll keep watching out for it.
Keep at it:).
9/30/2003 c3
9Clever Hobbit
Whoa. I have that butterflies-in-my-stomach feeling you get when you go on a roller-coaster, you know? It's so cool, but so scary at the same time.
One small detail though; if the chapters were in paragraphs, it would be a *lot* easier to read.

Whoa. I have that butterflies-in-my-stomach feeling you get when you go on a roller-coaster, you know? It's so cool, but so scary at the same time.
One small detail though; if the chapters were in paragraphs, it would be a *lot* easier to read.
9/30/2003 c2 dfhgjhjk
I really like your story and I hope you will write some more.
Very entertaining
I really like your story and I hope you will write some more.
Very entertaining
9/29/2003 c2 Hai
Oh, dear AU story that has such a sad start to it! Surely someone will find Pippin, yes? Don't let Merry get hurt too much! The only thing I would suggest is that you maybe seperate it into paragraphs, I had some problems keeping my place. I'm looking forward to more! Thank you!
Oh, dear AU story that has such a sad start to it! Surely someone will find Pippin, yes? Don't let Merry get hurt too much! The only thing I would suggest is that you maybe seperate it into paragraphs, I had some problems keeping my place. I'm looking forward to more! Thank you!
9/28/2003 c2 Birch tree
Please continue. I think this is really good, but we need to read more... :-))
Please continue. I think this is really good, but we need to read more... :-))