
7/29/2004 c9 Hollystarr
Poor Merry! Poor Merry! OH! Oh my gosh, this is SO sad!
Poor Merry! Poor Merry! OH! Oh my gosh, this is SO sad!
7/29/2004 c8 Hollystarr
OH MY GOSH! I LOVE IT! Is it true this is your first fic? I can't believe that! This is incredible! WOW! Keep writing, please!
OH MY GOSH! I LOVE IT! Is it true this is your first fic? I can't believe that! This is incredible! WOW! Keep writing, please!
7/28/2004 c13 Just Another Face in the Crowd
NO! IT'S ALL OVER! THE CRUSADE OF HOBBIT ANGST IS OVER! I can't believe it. Well, all good things must come to an end, right? This definatly qualifies as one of those.
~Spoon
NO! IT'S ALL OVER! THE CRUSADE OF HOBBIT ANGST IS OVER! I can't believe it. Well, all good things must come to an end, right? This definatly qualifies as one of those.
~Spoon
7/19/2004 c13
15Craic agus Ceol
i'm sorry it's over. i really loved the story and especially the happy ending.

i'm sorry it's over. i really loved the story and especially the happy ending.
7/14/2004 c13 Joslin
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep continue writing!
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it! Keep continue writing!
7/12/2004 c13 Lantahlothur
That was wonderful! You made an absolutly excellent ending, I loved it! I wish I could write endings as well as you. You're a very good writer! Kutos ;)!
That was wonderful! You made an absolutly excellent ending, I loved it! I wish I could write endings as well as you. You're a very good writer! Kutos ;)!
7/12/2004 c13 Ruinwen
well that was a perfect end to a lovely story. you have done something i could never do so im extreamly impressed hehehe
well i said im going to make this long but i really can't think of much to say other than being your beta has been one of the most interesting things i have ever done and i hope one day i will be able to do a much better job!
maybe living in the castle will help me! well one day we will see.
Maybe a WoT will take shape sometime in the distant future hehehehehe which im sure will be brilliant! maybe something to do with um i dont know i was thinking of Rand but then we dont really know whats gonna happen yet so we will have to wait and see!
I can't believe this is me last review of this baby wa oh well im sure i will be doing more soon i hope.
We all love u lots
Faile/Egwene/Aviendha (still can't decide)
and my
Perrin(Pippin) xx
well that was a perfect end to a lovely story. you have done something i could never do so im extreamly impressed hehehe
well i said im going to make this long but i really can't think of much to say other than being your beta has been one of the most interesting things i have ever done and i hope one day i will be able to do a much better job!
maybe living in the castle will help me! well one day we will see.
Maybe a WoT will take shape sometime in the distant future hehehehehe which im sure will be brilliant! maybe something to do with um i dont know i was thinking of Rand but then we dont really know whats gonna happen yet so we will have to wait and see!
I can't believe this is me last review of this baby wa oh well im sure i will be doing more soon i hope.
We all love u lots
Faile/Egwene/Aviendha (still can't decide)
and my
Perrin(Pippin) xx
7/12/2004 c13 Wanda
This story was perfect! Hope you write new fics soon :) *hugs*
This story was perfect! Hope you write new fics soon :) *hugs*
7/11/2004 c13
9Clever Hobbit
The bit with Aragorn and Merry was lovely!
Would you like to know what I think? I love this story to bits, and I want to cry at the thought of the end. I don't want this to end at all.

The bit with Aragorn and Merry was lovely!
Would you like to know what I think? I love this story to bits, and I want to cry at the thought of the end. I don't want this to end at all.
7/11/2004 c13 Gwien Star
**Sits in her comp. chair staring at the screen. She feels the same emotions from when she saw ROTK. It was all over.** Wow...THAT was a great story. I will admit that this is the only story out there that has brought tears to my eyes. This story was not a stupid Mary-Sue (some of them are ok) nor does it have a cheezy story line. This story has a very intresting story line that makes me coming back for more. You, Earelwen, have taken these two charicters to their emotional limits just has Professor Tolkien did with his charicters. The use of drama, suspense, loyalty and good morals have been fantastic. Your story has wormed it's way into my heart and I can totally relate to what these charicters were going through. I look forward to reading your future writings. Good job, this has a perfect ending and a perfect beginning. I'm no Seer, but your future as a writer shines brightly within you. If you need any help, don't be afraid to e-mail me.
As a fellow author and (putting it bluntly) a fan, I wish all the luck to you.
~@~ ~@~
Gwien
~@~ ~@~
**Sits in her comp. chair staring at the screen. She feels the same emotions from when she saw ROTK. It was all over.** Wow...THAT was a great story. I will admit that this is the only story out there that has brought tears to my eyes. This story was not a stupid Mary-Sue (some of them are ok) nor does it have a cheezy story line. This story has a very intresting story line that makes me coming back for more. You, Earelwen, have taken these two charicters to their emotional limits just has Professor Tolkien did with his charicters. The use of drama, suspense, loyalty and good morals have been fantastic. Your story has wormed it's way into my heart and I can totally relate to what these charicters were going through. I look forward to reading your future writings. Good job, this has a perfect ending and a perfect beginning. I'm no Seer, but your future as a writer shines brightly within you. If you need any help, don't be afraid to e-mail me.
As a fellow author and (putting it bluntly) a fan, I wish all the luck to you.
~@~ ~@~
Gwien
~@~ ~@~
7/10/2004 c12 Stacerz
That was such a sad chapter! Oh my goodness, I was like THIS close to crying! It was heart breaking :'(! I was sure Merry was going to die, and you tricked me! You're very good ;)
That was such a sad chapter! Oh my goodness, I was like THIS close to crying! It was heart breaking :'(! I was sure Merry was going to die, and you tricked me! You're very good ;)
6/30/2004 c12 4 JT
Hey Earelwen! Yes, you may be suprised to see me review at last, and in fact read at last. Anyway, I have finally joined the ranks that are dying to see the final chapter. You really are an addictive writer - when your first international bestseller comes out, you will have to put 'my fanfic name is Earelwen' on it and people will buy in droves! That aside, I think that your story is great, despite the grammatical errors that I know you know exist. You've a really good balance of description and action, but it would perhaps be good if some of the 'thought monologues' weren't so unbroken? Punctuate them with description or action? Well, cheers to 'No Escape this Time!'. I'm proud to be your friend, and a fan (you'll be pleased with this) to J.R.R.Tolkein, creater of the characters and backround of the entire Lord of the Rings!
Hey Earelwen! Yes, you may be suprised to see me review at last, and in fact read at last. Anyway, I have finally joined the ranks that are dying to see the final chapter. You really are an addictive writer - when your first international bestseller comes out, you will have to put 'my fanfic name is Earelwen' on it and people will buy in droves! That aside, I think that your story is great, despite the grammatical errors that I know you know exist. You've a really good balance of description and action, but it would perhaps be good if some of the 'thought monologues' weren't so unbroken? Punctuate them with description or action? Well, cheers to 'No Escape this Time!'. I'm proud to be your friend, and a fan (you'll be pleased with this) to J.R.R.Tolkein, creater of the characters and backround of the entire Lord of the Rings!
6/27/2004 c9 Camille
I love your story. It is well written and interesting. Thanks for taking the time to write such a good story.
I love your story. It is well written and interesting. Thanks for taking the time to write such a good story.