8/5/2012 c2 Guest
love it!
love it!
11/20/2007 c1 6Tsuki Aquarius Hanju
Umm... Where do the sentences end? And where is the breaks in the peragraph? And How the heck does Andrew know about the communicator? (Only the Senshi and Momaru know about them!) Yeah. Good Story. poor construction. Please try to clean it up. Sorry! i.i *Beats herself against wall for her brutal honesty* Gomenesai!
Umm... Where do the sentences end? And where is the breaks in the peragraph? And How the heck does Andrew know about the communicator? (Only the Senshi and Momaru know about them!) Yeah. Good Story. poor construction. Please try to clean it up. Sorry! i.i *Beats herself against wall for her brutal honesty* Gomenesai!
10/1/2004 c2 38Chikara-Yuy
COOL!I love it. Serena, harry's baby cousin cute,
and original. I can't wait to see what happens next. It should be quite entertaining!
COOL!I love it. Serena, harry's baby cousin cute,
and original. I can't wait to see what happens next. It should be quite entertaining!