for The daughter of Seifer Almasy?12/23/2008 c20 Chaos Ragnarok
Oh wow! I am so glad I found this story again.. This is truely my favorite fanfiction of all time, bravo! ^_^
Oh wow! I am so glad I found this story again.. This is truely my favorite fanfiction of all time, bravo! ^_^
11/1/2005 c20 
17Depressed Mizuki
KYAHH! IT'S OVER! WAHH! This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. The characters are just so SQUEE and the plot line is just so SQUEE and everything is just so SQUEE! (I know I sound like an idiot but I'm in love with your story.) i can't wait for the sequel! Even though I love Alloran and Cassiel to death i think it would have more plot if Alloran nd Leo ended up getting together. And if that thing that the sorceress showed her about Leo killing Cassiel and Tal and then trying to kill her it would be even more awesome. But that's just my opinion. It's your story and you get to choose what you wanna do. i just think that Leo/Alloran would be more plot worthy than Alloran/Cassiel... Hehe.
Well, until you start posting that awesome sequel,
Mizuki Kurenaida
17Depressed MizukiKYAHH! IT'S OVER! WAHH! This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. The characters are just so SQUEE and the plot line is just so SQUEE and everything is just so SQUEE! (I know I sound like an idiot but I'm in love with your story.) i can't wait for the sequel! Even though I love Alloran and Cassiel to death i think it would have more plot if Alloran nd Leo ended up getting together. And if that thing that the sorceress showed her about Leo killing Cassiel and Tal and then trying to kill her it would be even more awesome. But that's just my opinion. It's your story and you get to choose what you wanna do. i just think that Leo/Alloran would be more plot worthy than Alloran/Cassiel... Hehe.
Well, until you start posting that awesome sequel,
Mizuki Kurenaida
7/27/2005 c20 ForciblyLethal
HI! Remember me? I love this story...it's frickin long but I loved it. You could seriously probably turn this into a book. ^^ Happy to see this again, and good job.
HI! Remember me? I love this story...it's frickin long but I loved it. You could seriously probably turn this into a book. ^^ Happy to see this again, and good job.
4/7/2005 c20 6Laura135
lol ok, so i wanted an Alloran and Casseil epilogue, but I actually liked this pne just as much, it just screams, hey maybe there'll be a sequel seeing as this suggests maybe some future generation will find the gem *crosses fingers* (and did I mention how much I would love you if there was? lol)
It ended with random T though, was that a typo or did some of the chapter get cut off?
6Laura135lol ok, so i wanted an Alloran and Casseil epilogue, but I actually liked this pne just as much, it just screams, hey maybe there'll be a sequel seeing as this suggests maybe some future generation will find the gem *crosses fingers* (and did I mention how much I would love you if there was? lol)
It ended with random T though, was that a typo or did some of the chapter get cut off?
4/6/2005 c20 Wild
O! I woner what is going to happen. (The song I mean is that I was listening to one, FEH!)
O! I woner what is going to happen. (The song I mean is that I was listening to one, FEH!)
4/6/2005 c20 BlueStrife
nice...but i was kinda hoping for an epilogue of Casseil and Alloran...perhaps the future generations of Tal/Sef, Leo, Flare, Etc. but this is good too, but i wanna see what happened to aforementioned peoples LoL
nice...but i was kinda hoping for an epilogue of Casseil and Alloran...perhaps the future generations of Tal/Sef, Leo, Flare, Etc. but this is good too, but i wanna see what happened to aforementioned peoples LoL
4/5/2005 c2 52Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo
Okay, mistakes in this chapter. It's okay though, because I'm sure I do the same thing...so I can't say much.
But aside from the grammar mistakes, good job! The story is developing quickly! I am looking forward to reading the next chapter! (Yes, I know it's up, but I have to leave soon...I'm in school and we're having PSSA testing, and my free period is almost over I think.)
So I will leave you with the comment that your story is well written, and I encourage you to write more! (Not in this story...like another one. ^^)
52Tsuyunoinochi KoukyoOkay, mistakes in this chapter. It's okay though, because I'm sure I do the same thing...so I can't say much.
But aside from the grammar mistakes, good job! The story is developing quickly! I am looking forward to reading the next chapter! (Yes, I know it's up, but I have to leave soon...I'm in school and we're having PSSA testing, and my free period is almost over I think.)
So I will leave you with the comment that your story is well written, and I encourage you to write more! (Not in this story...like another one. ^^)
4/5/2005 c1 Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo
Ah, good beginning. 'First impressions are the strongest,' and I must say, this first impression makes me want to read more. And I looked at the length of the story...wow! So many words!
It's hard to find a good, long story with hardly any mistakes grammar and spelling wise. But you have impressed me! Now I'm on to the next chapter!
Ah, good beginning. 'First impressions are the strongest,' and I must say, this first impression makes me want to read more. And I looked at the length of the story...wow! So many words!
It's hard to find a good, long story with hardly any mistakes grammar and spelling wise. But you have impressed me! Now I'm on to the next chapter!
4/4/2005 c19 Maria
Hey D. You finally posted it! cool ;)
Hey D. You finally posted it! cool ;)
4/4/2005 c19 4Wild E. ALF
Wolfie you finshed, I'm so proud of you! Now all you have to do now is write the sequel and prequel!
4Wild E. ALFWolfie you finshed, I'm so proud of you! Now all you have to do now is write the sequel and prequel!
4/4/2005 c18 Wild E. ALF
Wolfie I'm crying! I don't know id it because of the spicy peppers or the song. Or maybe that you actually UPDATED!
Wolfie I'm crying! I don't know id it because of the spicy peppers or the song. Or maybe that you actually UPDATED!