for And Before Me.............11/24/2001 c1 
26Secret Staircase
I guess it's a bit short... but I think 'concise' would suit it better. It gets everything in, with very few words. Brilliant.
26Secret StaircaseI guess it's a bit short... but I think 'concise' would suit it better. It gets everything in, with very few words. Brilliant.
6/20/2001 c1 3RavenLady
That was really good for something so short. I like it short, actually. Really succinct (sp?). Out of curiousity, what was the challenge? I'm guessing one of the requirements was about horticulture, since that last line was a bit random... :-)
3RavenLadyThat was really good for something so short. I like it short, actually. Really succinct (sp?). Out of curiousity, what was the challenge? I'm guessing one of the requirements was about horticulture, since that last line was a bit random... :-)
2/4/2001 c1 63Trinity Day
It's been done, yes, but it doesn't mean you shouldn't have written this. It was very good. I rather liked the simple yet powerful images and emotions in this story. Excellent job.
63Trinity DayIt's been done, yes, but it doesn't mean you shouldn't have written this. It was very good. I rather liked the simple yet powerful images and emotions in this story. Excellent job.
1/19/2001 c1 Andrew
Hilarious! ' "Bob's Horticulture Centre". It is irrelevant. ' Good stuff Rosemary. Keep it up!
Hilarious! ' "Bob's Horticulture Centre". It is irrelevant. ' Good stuff Rosemary. Keep it up!
1/9/2001 c1 1Qwyneth
Hmmm...good. Not as powerful as it could have been, but hey-you were dealing with 100 words here. ^_^ I do like the part with the sign...nice imagery.
1QwynethHmmm...good. Not as powerful as it could have been, but hey-you were dealing with 100 words here. ^_^ I do like the part with the sign...nice imagery.
12/30/2000 c1 Erin
Yo yo waz up? Luv ya story! it's um cool.. I guess don't really get it but ya um ok ANYWAYS to the point well done!
~Roach~
Yo yo waz up? Luv ya story! it's um cool.. I guess don't really get it but ya um ok ANYWAYS to the point well done!
~Roach~
12/29/2000 c1 59Sinical-Sarchasm
That was really good! I wish I could write that well. I am steadily loosing my hope that I may earn even an honorable mention in this contest. Oh well. Please r/r my entry? *looks hopeful* Anyway, have a nice day and keep writing!
59Sinical-SarchasmThat was really good! I wish I could write that well. I am steadily loosing my hope that I may earn even an honorable mention in this contest. Oh well. Please r/r my entry? *looks hopeful* Anyway, have a nice day and keep writing!
12/29/2000 c1 Naru
This is good. Yep.
This is good. Yep.