7/21/2022 c48 1Signal Lost
Yeah, this was great to read up until this point, and I'm sure it's just as enjoyable from here on, but I can't keep reading of Harry doesn't get with Cassie. For nearly fifty chapters I've watched them get closer and closer to each other, and I simply refuse to continue to the end knowing they won't end up happily ever after with each other. Besides, they're better for each other than he and Ginny ever were. I wish you the best! Keep calm and carry on :) It was great while it lasted.

7/27/2017 c48 2Newbie1104
So this is it. I'm gonna stop here. Nothing against casual dating and people breaking up. It happens all the time, but switching a romance that has been developing for the entire story for another that only got a couple of mentions at the later chapters... I don't know how it can be considered good. And this coming from a HP/GW fan. Not to mention the later romance sounded totally unhealthy. Now I understand why this never got recommended when I was searching for HP/muggle OC pairing, despite its good quality.

Sigh, it's not often that I get this angry reading fanfiction. I still appreciate it that you didn't just kill off your OC to make way for new romance like some other fics out there. Just wish you could have handled the switch better, giving Ginny some more developement... This is even worse than her romance arc in canon. Totally disappointing and won't be checking out the sequel.

5/18/2016 c48 choices22
Harry should have back-handed ginny she had no right to get as physical as she did. Not a ginny fan, I'm done with this story.

8/15/2014 c47 GroveWolf
quite frankly i disagree with you. somehow you created a perfectly respectable Mary-Sue. someone i could get behind and support. she was good for harry and the way you described harry's need to be loved, sounded wrong. he was better off with Cassie. there aren't two worlds, there was no decision, he knew he was going back the whole time. the only thing that changed was that he had a girl he loved and would want to return to after it was over. the two worlds nonsense is incredible, he could quite obviously be a wizard with a muggle wife. it's obviously happened and they could have done it too. quite frankly i expected mrs robinson to have been born ms. black a squib or her mother, that's where the star name tradition would have come from and it would be revealed that cassie herself was also a squib. that's what i thought was coming, i felt the transition from cute romance to war footing was a little unstable but we've made the change and it works somehow. so i think Cassie could have worked and harry could have gone off and fought and then he would have come back to her the end.

4/28/2014 c54 honore
Loved this soooo much? It was very well written. I loved the storyline. Thanks

9/8/2012 c54 creativesm75
nice

1/18/2012 c54 schrodingerscat
I enjoyed this story so thanks for writing it, but I have to complain a little. It should be 2 maybe even 3 times shorter. I get that you wanted some fluff, but describing exactly what they ate every day was just boring. And your chapters are hard to read, because of long paragraphs and too little dialog.

I hated Ron in this story, they say they don't have anything against muggles but they really treated her badly.

I was hoping that Harry would stay with Cassie. When you described his relationship with Ginny I was under the impression that it is obviously not real love. Well, she never loved him for him, and he hates people that see him mainly as a hero. Whole idea to date Ginny was motivated by a need to have someone to love, kind of a bad reason to be together. I never understood why cannon Harry would be with a groupie but in your story Ginny is even more like that.

I'm not gonna read a sequel - it's probably also too long and has this annoying couple in it

11/15/2010 c54 Myuu November
This is a really good story. I like Cassie very much and it came as a disappointment she and Harry had to break up. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

Thank you for publishing this great piece of fanfiction!