for Deeper than Indigo1/29/2015 c4 JSemillano
Nice . . I love the story hope its a complete one. . Cant wait for the next chapter . . Tnx .:)
Nice . . I love the story hope its a complete one. . Cant wait for the next chapter . . Tnx .:)
3/30/2013 c4 tim lee1
Wow...sorry that this ends this way. The writing is great and the story seem ready to go somewhere...maybe you ran out of ideas. I'm a little sad that Hinata didn't even get back together with Naruto at all. I wish you would continue...thanks :)
Wow...sorry that this ends this way. The writing is great and the story seem ready to go somewhere...maybe you ran out of ideas. I'm a little sad that Hinata didn't even get back together with Naruto at all. I wish you would continue...thanks :)
3/30/2013 c3 tim lee1
I like the path that your plot has taken here. It seems that Hinata has some new ability now...did the fight with Neji cause this? I wonder what happened to Naruto though...he hasn't even been to see Hinata yet? I will read on to find answers:)
I like the path that your plot has taken here. It seems that Hinata has some new ability now...did the fight with Neji cause this? I wonder what happened to Naruto though...he hasn't even been to see Hinata yet? I will read on to find answers:)
3/30/2013 c2 tim lee1
Pretty surprising happening there at the end. I wonder what Hinata saw there...was it a chakra echo? I'll read on to find out, good chapter.
Pretty surprising happening there at the end. I wonder what Hinata saw there...was it a chakra echo? I'll read on to find out, good chapter.
3/30/2013 c1 tim lee1
Excellent chapter...the emotions that Naruto has here for Hinata are a great way to begin. I am wondering if in this story Hinata already loves Naruto or not...I'll read on to find out.
Excellent chapter...the emotions that Naruto has here for Hinata are a great way to begin. I am wondering if in this story Hinata already loves Naruto or not...I'll read on to find out.
12/31/2012 c4 Amer Leon
great story start...it is so fascinating to see how many stories on this site have just the beginning idea, which is sooo good and then quit. i guess there is no chance after all of this time...so thanks for the chaps...God bless.
great story start...it is so fascinating to see how many stories on this site have just the beginning idea, which is sooo good and then quit. i guess there is no chance after all of this time...so thanks for the chaps...God bless.
12/30/2012 c3 Amer Leon
loved the chap...kind of a mystery though...but in a positive way for hinata. tsunade is the type to show concern and is helping her...the offer at the end was a good touch. great writing.
loved the chap...kind of a mystery though...but in a positive way for hinata. tsunade is the type to show concern and is helping her...the offer at the end was a good touch. great writing.
12/30/2012 c2 Amer Leon
very cool chap...i was surprised when it was not naruto there at her side. the chakra present there was a great idea and then to see her chakra mix in as well. great!
very cool chap...i was surprised when it was not naruto there at her side. the chakra present there was a great idea and then to see her chakra mix in as well. great!
12/30/2012 c1 Amer Leon
wow...what a difference here...i like what you did with this sooo long ago. as of today they really are together at long last...in chpt 615 of the manga...what a cool idea you have here. hinata had these feelings from the start.
wow...what a difference here...i like what you did with this sooo long ago. as of today they really are together at long last...in chpt 615 of the manga...what a cool idea you have here. hinata had these feelings from the start.
7/23/2012 c4 
4animelover00094
This story is marvelous. It has so much potential and i am sure it will become great once regular chapter updates come. Please consider this course of action.
4animelover00094This story is marvelous. It has so much potential and i am sure it will become great once regular chapter updates come. Please consider this course of action.
4/24/2009 c4 10Cueil
your story seems more like a documentary then a fanfiction... it's not a bad thing just an observation
10Cueilyour story seems more like a documentary then a fanfiction... it's not a bad thing just an observation
2/9/2009 c4 grey mage
six years... and these were really good chapters. i am glad that you have come back to continue this. i hope that you do not stop again.
six years... and these were really good chapters. i am glad that you have come back to continue this. i hope that you do not stop again.
2/8/2009 c4 16Mistress DragonFlame
It's been so long since the last up-date, I've no idea what's going on anymore.
16Mistress DragonFlameIt's been so long since the last up-date, I've no idea what's going on anymore.