
5/15/2005 c3
16Mistress DragonFlame
OO, this is a very nice piece! Interesting, and believeable. I will wait for more!

OO, this is a very nice piece! Interesting, and believeable. I will wait for more!
5/9/2005 c3 noname
This 'ailment' kinda sounds like the chakra echoes.
Nevermind... Good fic, keep it up.
This 'ailment' kinda sounds like the chakra echoes.
Nevermind... Good fic, keep it up.
5/8/2005 c3 naruhina lover
Awsome. Bin waiting for this chap for a while now. Can't wait to see what else you got planned.
for some reason, it seems like your using the 'echo' stuff from Two Halves. Are you? Anyways, please update quick
Awsome. Bin waiting for this chap for a while now. Can't wait to see what else you got planned.
for some reason, it seems like your using the 'echo' stuff from Two Halves. Are you? Anyways, please update quick
2/21/2005 c3 Overlord
I would very much like to find out what's up with Hinata, I don't like cliffhangers when there is no next chapter ^_^
I would very much like to find out what's up with Hinata, I don't like cliffhangers when there is no next chapter ^_^
2/12/2005 c3 dfsjdnsjfbj
I love this story and the detail you put into it, especially in the first and second chapter. I was given a vivid understanding of the emotions going through both Hinata and Naruto's head, that hardly any Naru/Hina fanfics I have come across have managed to achieve. Please update soon.
I love this story and the detail you put into it, especially in the first and second chapter. I was given a vivid understanding of the emotions going through both Hinata and Naruto's head, that hardly any Naru/Hina fanfics I have come across have managed to achieve. Please update soon.
2/2/2005 c3
8DapperCrapper
Ooh. This is getting interesting. I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. *adds to favs*

Ooh. This is getting interesting. I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. *adds to favs*
1/18/2005 c3 ClassicDrogn
Nice! I can see SOME similarity to Two Halves, but hardly enough to call it plagiarism, perticularly when it's a logical developement as an advanced form of the Byakugan. So, nil illegitemi carborundum, ne? I continue to look foreward to the continuation of your story.
- CD
Nice! I can see SOME similarity to Two Halves, but hardly enough to call it plagiarism, perticularly when it's a logical developement as an advanced form of the Byakugan. So, nil illegitemi carborundum, ne? I continue to look foreward to the continuation of your story.
- CD
1/6/2005 c3
38Artemis-chan of Redwing
Yay! I'm so happy this was updated. ^_^ I want to know what's up with Hinata, but it's so awesome Tsunade's offering for her to become a medical-nin. Yay!
Artemis-chan

Yay! I'm so happy this was updated. ^_^ I want to know what's up with Hinata, but it's so awesome Tsunade's offering for her to become a medical-nin. Yay!
Artemis-chan
1/6/2005 c3 Kei-kun
Now its getting interesting. Hope to see more soon.
Now its getting interesting. Hope to see more soon.
1/6/2005 c2 Kei-kun
Its getting better.
Its getting better.
1/6/2005 c1 Kei-kun
Like the story so far.
Like the story so far.
1/6/2005 c3 Kyokugaisha
I like the way your story is writen but I would like more Hinata and Naruto interactions.
About Hinata's gift, Have you read Two Halves? Hinata can do something similar to what you said, you better check it out so you won't have people acussing you of plagarism.
I like the way your story is writen but I would like more Hinata and Naruto interactions.
About Hinata's gift, Have you read Two Halves? Hinata can do something similar to what you said, you better check it out so you won't have people acussing you of plagarism.
1/6/2005 c3 The Gandhara
Very nice story, but it's a bit confusing. Has Hinata's byakugan been modified or what? If she can still see the chakra pathways, how come the elders pronounced her blood limit dead? Didn't they believe her or what?
Very nice story, but it's a bit confusing. Has Hinata's byakugan been modified or what? If she can still see the chakra pathways, how come the elders pronounced her blood limit dead? Didn't they believe her or what?
1/6/2005 c3 itai
more hina/naru fluff!
more hina/naru fluff!
1/6/2005 c3 Chocobaby
Supurb story! Hinata is JUST the type to be a medical nin! She can heal Naruto! XD XD XD
Can't wait for more!
Supurb story! Hinata is JUST the type to be a medical nin! She can heal Naruto! XD XD XD
Can't wait for more!