for Phoebe's soccer team12/18/2007 c1 wibblewobble12
Good fic, but why do you put dashes instead of (or after) quotation marks? And sometimes you don't have any quotations marks at all so you just have to assume someone is speaking or that they've finished what they're saying.
It makes the whole fic difficult to read.
Good fic, but why do you put dashes instead of (or after) quotation marks? And sometimes you don't have any quotations marks at all so you just have to assume someone is speaking or that they've finished what they're saying.
It makes the whole fic difficult to read.
10/23/2005 c10 
30CaseyJr
I didn´t like your fanfic but I LOVE it,fantastic!I´ll add it to my favourites!
30CaseyJrI didn´t like your fanfic but I LOVE it,fantastic!I´ll add it to my favourites!
1/27/2004 c9 3rw89
THE END? WHAT DO YOU MEAN THE END? YOU BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL, OR YOU'LL BE IN BIG TROUBLE
3rw89THE END? WHAT DO YOU MEAN THE END? YOU BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL, OR YOU'LL BE IN BIG TROUBLE
1/19/2004 c10 5Gryffindor620
1:50 am- 1/20/04
Come on!
I know it hard to write story with such a
great plot as this but the suspense
is so great that I may have to go to the
hospital!
You know that this is the! only story that I've
read that had angst!
I detest angst, and I still do, but this is an
exception!
Update Soon Son!
5Gryffindor6201:50 am- 1/20/04
Come on!
I know it hard to write story with such a
great plot as this but the suspense
is so great that I may have to go to the
hospital!
You know that this is the! only story that I've
read that had angst!
I detest angst, and I still do, but this is an
exception!
Update Soon Son!
12/18/2003 c9 1frwan133gurl
I really like this story.I love fanfics about the sisters in school.PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! you're a very good writer.
1frwan133gurlI really like this story.I love fanfics about the sisters in school.PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! you're a very good writer.
12/14/2003 c9 11bigreader
WHAT!THAT CANT BE THE END! NO! What happened to the evil ones? why didnt prue just move them with her eyes? ah i need to know please e-mail me!
11bigreaderWHAT!THAT CANT BE THE END! NO! What happened to the evil ones? why didnt prue just move them with her eyes? ah i need to know please e-mail me!
12/4/2003 c9 EdIsMySwEeTiE29
i absolutly loved this story, it was so great, best fanfiction i have read by far, please post up the sequal, i would love to read it
i absolutly loved this story, it was so great, best fanfiction i have read by far, please post up the sequal, i would love to read it
12/3/2003 c9 Chantelle
omg i am shaking this story is so good! pls continue or i might shrivel up like a prune! but will julia,jane and tina get arrested or will phoebe and her charmed sisters get better? as u can c im so curios!
omg i am shaking this story is so good! pls continue or i might shrivel up like a prune! but will julia,jane and tina get arrested or will phoebe and her charmed sisters get better? as u can c im so curios!
12/2/2003 c9 Sci fi fan
Great ending. I definatly like to see the sequel.
Great ending. I definatly like to see the sequel.
12/2/2003 c9 Paigefan