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8/30/2015 c9 16Moonchild1212
Oh I love this chapter :) Perfect!
8/30/2015 c4 Moonchild1212
Aww - so sweet!
8/30/2015 c2 Moonchild1212
Poor Pippin! What an awesome start!
3/14/2012 c5 1Kharuba
This is a beautiful story!
8/21/2010 c11 18Dreamsand
Very sweet ^^ I'm a sucker for crying males too, and the poem is lovely (I tried to read it in Swedish... since I am Dutch I could understand some of it but not everything).

LG, Sara
5/4/2010 c1 NitemareHippyGirl
I adore this story :) It is so sweet, Merry and Pippin just seems to perfect. Very well written!
11/12/2009 c11 2yaoiluvr007
oh my gosh. i wouild love to hear the poem read in swedish, cause I can't read it. i think it looks beautiful, and the translation was amazing.
11/12/2009 c9 yaoiluvr007
okay. very well done, you got them to take it slow and carefully. it's a pet peeve of mine when pepole go way to fast. Thats just PORN!
11/12/2009 c3 yaoiluvr007
wow. that poem was amazing!
11/12/2009 c2 yaoiluvr007
aw. okay, you got it real good. now, i think that you are doing absolulty wonderful work. you should try publishing your work on a wider scale, make up your own story!
7/12/2007 c10 3Shadow Wolf Dreamer
Beautiful... I love it. ^_^
1/13/2006 c10 9Briticism
aw. that was very sweet and cute. :) I enjoyed it.
1/13/2006 c1 Briticism
Just so you know, cousins don't count as incest! It's a little odd for nowadays, perhaps, but even still, it's still legal. And it was certainly legal in the past, as well as extremely common.
6/25/2005 c3 prequalthe2nd deviantART
And the poem in Japanese :)

最も貴重な陽気! 私のサポート、あなたが私の意志および私の慰めの私のエネルギー源である。私の中心を自尊心と膨れさせる、原因は私の箱で上がり、育つことを愛し、傷つくとき、私が支えるとき私の慰めを追求し、私に感じを強くさせる。熱心で私を満たし、励ます、私のインスピレーシヨンおよび私の情熱である。暗闇が私の中で支配しているとき、私の世界で照るライトである。私の生命のライトが私を盲目にしているとき私が私の目を休ませることを可能にする暗闇である。私の精神仲間および私の愛永久にである。私の希望、私の喜びおよび私の平和である。単語、試みでI が、いかに説明できるか常に私の近くにあること私を、私愛する今日そして明日そして永遠どの位のための約束すればすべてあるか。私によってが永久にそして常にほしいかどの位あなたとあって。私がであるそれ言うことができる唯一の事: ' である私のすべて!' 私はのPippin 愛する

Sorry, seeing it translated made me have to do this ;)

Your story is very clever and sweet! Keep writing
4/30/2005 c11 Grostein
Very interesting story, and I also enjoyed reading the poem in swedish

At least now I can say "Du är mitt allt" to swedes lol

Jag gillar dikten på svenska :D
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