for Five7/6/2011 c3 rat
pair up Jen and Gunny.
pair up Jen and Gunny.
12/31/2004 c4 navyjag13
omg...you have to keep writting this..i know its been a long time since you wrote..but omg..good story
omg...you have to keep writting this..i know its been a long time since you wrote..but omg..good story
5/31/2004 c1 Jana
YOu've got to write more and longer chapters.
lol..
YOu've got to write more and longer chapters.
lol..
1/12/2004 c4 Anita
Excellent Story I can't wait to read more.
Excellent Story I can't wait to read more.
12/25/2003 c4 Beth
Jey, I like it...to tired to think of ideas about the story but maybe after work tomorrow...
Jey, I like it...to tired to think of ideas about the story but maybe after work tomorrow...
12/5/2003 c4 lehcar412
I can't wait to read more! I love where this story is going!
I can't wait to read more! I love where this story is going!
12/4/2003 c4 Kate
hey that was great! I really hope u add some more chapters coz that was 1 of the best stories i have ever read about Harm and Mac. Its so close to their actual relationship that i think u should email this story to the producers and see what they say. Please add some more chapters, i really wanna see what happens!
hey that was great! I really hope u add some more chapters coz that was 1 of the best stories i have ever read about Harm and Mac. Its so close to their actual relationship that i think u should email this story to the producers and see what they say. Please add some more chapters, i really wanna see what happens!
12/3/2003 c4 hopechest6
Please continue - i want to know what happens next...maybe have the Admiral catch them -that could be interesting
Please continue - i want to know what happens next...maybe have the Admiral catch them -that could be interesting
12/2/2003 c4 aj
I really enjoy how the story is progressing.
Some of the lines made me chuckle to myself, H and M just talking all non shalantly (sp?) about how to go about making a baby.
Please continue, I'm looking forward to reading more.
I really enjoy how the story is progressing.
Some of the lines made me chuckle to myself, H and M just talking all non shalantly (sp?) about how to go about making a baby.
Please continue, I'm looking forward to reading more.
12/2/2003 c4 
2LoneEagle13
Hey, awesome story. Don't have any ideas, just make sure the Admiral doesn't find out. Actually I do have an idea. Have Mac transfer to another military thing, but stay in the same relative area. That way they can get married too.
2LoneEagle13Hey, awesome story. Don't have any ideas, just make sure the Admiral doesn't find out. Actually I do have an idea. Have Mac transfer to another military thing, but stay in the same relative area. That way they can get married too.
12/2/2003 c4 chris
I have to admit - this is coming along very well. I absolutely LOVE Harreitt overhearing. That was a nice twist to all the promise stories out there. YOu've got to write more and longer chapters.
I have to admit - this is coming along very well. I absolutely LOVE Harreitt overhearing. That was a nice twist to all the promise stories out there. YOu've got to write more and longer chapters.
12/2/2003 c4 kroline
You're doing a good job here !
Can't wait...
You're doing a good job here !
Can't wait...
12/2/2003 c4 Ruli
I like this chapt. I like the way they were both thinking the same thing (that's totally them!) Ok, for the next chapter I think you should have like an intermediate chapt. before friday night, maybe about how they both can't wait, and that it seems like forever away. Then maybe make it friday and write a chapt. about the weekend and how they sleep together all weekend, (discovering their true love for each other). Please don't make it a really angsty story, like one of them says they love the other one and then takes it back or something. Try and keep it romance, (if possible). Keep up the good work!
I like this chapt. I like the way they were both thinking the same thing (that's totally them!) Ok, for the next chapter I think you should have like an intermediate chapt. before friday night, maybe about how they both can't wait, and that it seems like forever away. Then maybe make it friday and write a chapt. about the weekend and how they sleep together all weekend, (discovering their true love for each other). Please don't make it a really angsty story, like one of them says they love the other one and then takes it back or something. Try and keep it romance, (if possible). Keep up the good work!
12/1/2003 c4 sunchaser2
lol. pleae say that they will get together at the end! this is a great story. :)
lol. pleae say that they will get together at the end! this is a great story. :)