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15Dragoon-Yue
Holy cow! You haven't updated this since 2003! Are you going to finish this? I'd really like to see how this goes.

Holy cow! You haven't updated this since 2003! Are you going to finish this? I'd really like to see how this goes.
8/10/2007 c1 Chibi-mint
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-!_~-Chibi-mint
2/12/2005 c1
4Hiei's Firefly
This story is really good so far. can't wait to read more. update when you can.
bye
Dark Devil Goddess.

This story is really good so far. can't wait to read more. update when you can.
bye
Dark Devil Goddess.
11/16/2004 c1
9mystlady
nice crossover even though I have no idea what YYH is about. I was hoping to join your community you made for Hotaru in GW-SM section but you don't have email so I can write to you. In return, would you like to join NOIR Outer senshi community here in ? I'm looking for staff member. *pretty please* I'll send you the link So sorry for taking up the space here.

nice crossover even though I have no idea what YYH is about. I was hoping to join your community you made for Hotaru in GW-SM section but you don't have email so I can write to you. In return, would you like to join NOIR Outer senshi community here in ? I'm looking for staff member. *pretty please* I'll send you the link So sorry for taking up the space here.
8/8/2004 c1 Psyche
Interesting story. My only complaint is... why did you change Makoto's hair color? Grar. I mean, geeze. If you said it was any shade of red (even though red is actually orange... I've never understood that), I'd be fine. If you said her hair was any shade of brown I'd be fine. But! Black? Why? Why must you be clichéing with the black? What did she ever do to you to make you change her hair color? Wah. Anyway... that's the only thing I don't like about your story... mostly. -_-; There're a few minor things, but... what'ar.
Interesting story. My only complaint is... why did you change Makoto's hair color? Grar. I mean, geeze. If you said it was any shade of red (even though red is actually orange... I've never understood that), I'd be fine. If you said her hair was any shade of brown I'd be fine. But! Black? Why? Why must you be clichéing with the black? What did she ever do to you to make you change her hair color? Wah. Anyway... that's the only thing I don't like about your story... mostly. -_-; There're a few minor things, but... what'ar.
1/14/2004 c1 Morisato-kun
. . . HELLO! Where's the REST! :P Dernit. Please keep your plot, not your pairing, in mind. It has been officially decided that Kurama and Makoto are/would be perfect for each other, so you don't have to worry about changing her personality any-she'll be fine as she is. Just..do those of us who expect only the best of a writer's work to be posted and pay attention to plot. LOL LOVE the story, though and can't wait for the next update! ^_~ dedicated to firey? ^-^ Coolness
. . . HELLO! Where's the REST! :P Dernit. Please keep your plot, not your pairing, in mind. It has been officially decided that Kurama and Makoto are/would be perfect for each other, so you don't have to worry about changing her personality any-she'll be fine as she is. Just..do those of us who expect only the best of a writer's work to be posted and pay attention to plot. LOL LOVE the story, though and can't wait for the next update! ^_~ dedicated to firey? ^-^ Coolness
12/6/2003 c1
18Jovianokami
Hey that was great! I so happy! I so happy! I so happy! I so happy! I so happy! Oh, Please you must update soon and could you make the chapters longer,please! Oh, I just love this story! I gott to put on my favorite stories list! Please update soon, okay?

Hey that was great! I so happy! I so happy! I so happy! I so happy! I so happy! Oh, Please you must update soon and could you make the chapters longer,please! Oh, I just love this story! I gott to put on my favorite stories list! Please update soon, okay?
11/14/2003 c1 Pyro Kitty Cat
GEEZ! Dude it is AWESOME! I luv it.
GEEZ! Dude it is AWESOME! I luv it.
11/6/2003 c1
6ColdFang
Nice Work! Hiei's third eye is called a Jagan. I hope to see more of this soon!

Nice Work! Hiei's third eye is called a Jagan. I hope to see more of this soon!
11/4/2003 c1 TINA
wow this sounds good! i LIKE HOTARU /HIEI TOGETHER! PLEASE WRITE MORE
wow this sounds good! i LIKE HOTARU /HIEI TOGETHER! PLEASE WRITE MORE
11/4/2003 c1 Final-Fan
The story is far too contrived, but other than that quite good.
By contrived, I mean that it's awfully convenient for your purposes that Usagi somehow knows about the Yu Yu Hakusho world, and the problems people will be having in it in 17 years. Even worse is the fact that the library seems to be omniscient (all-knowing) on the subject. Besides which, no mention is made of WHY Usagi is doing this. Is she just being a Good Samaritan to other universes? Is she really, really bored?
I (and most of your readers, I'm sure) will forgive all of this as long as the rest of the story is good. Good luck.
The story is far too contrived, but other than that quite good.
By contrived, I mean that it's awfully convenient for your purposes that Usagi somehow knows about the Yu Yu Hakusho world, and the problems people will be having in it in 17 years. Even worse is the fact that the library seems to be omniscient (all-knowing) on the subject. Besides which, no mention is made of WHY Usagi is doing this. Is she just being a Good Samaritan to other universes? Is she really, really bored?
I (and most of your readers, I'm sure) will forgive all of this as long as the rest of the story is good. Good luck.
11/4/2003 c1 shadowkistune
good start and hiei's gegone is spelled jagan okay anyway i can't wait until makoto meets the yyh gang update soon
good start and hiei's gegone is spelled jagan okay anyway i can't wait until makoto meets the yyh gang update soon
11/3/2003 c1 Katie
Great start! I really liked the originality. This story has alot of potential, I am definitely looking forward to the next update!
Great start! I really liked the originality. This story has alot of potential, I am definitely looking forward to the next update!