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4/26/2013 c1 1Shade40
This didn't flow very well. It felt to me more like a dozen different comic strips, with loose connections but not meant to be strung together in story format. When I chopped it up in my head, though, the plot and jokes all seemed Dilbert-esque. The heads of cabbage, hippopotamus spelling, and nephew potty training all stuck out to me as especially likely canon jokes.
10/13/2010 c1 179Susan M. M
"They haven't returned it to you, but they have gotten 27 rejection letters, complete with 19 insults and 2 notes of sympathy over your learning disorder"! Wonderful line.
3/31/2008 c1 Queen Twix
HAH HA LOL...

ah... that was a good laugh!

That was really good. The characters are so close to the real comic.
2/10/2008 c1 8Wheatbread
Quite enjoyable. You may think you didn't know the characters very well, but I could picture them. The scenario seemed like Dilbert, too.
9/6/2007 c1 15Linwen
"When he read the part about the butler named Butler who committed the murder"

So, 'Dwayne Vain' is secretely Eoin Colfer? *LOL*

Good story, very funny. :D
10/23/2006 c1 Generic Character
Very nice!
9/15/2006 c1 12TapDancingKittens
That was hillarious! Good job!
4/21/2005 c1 1Lord Drothgard
Please don't ever try to imitate the humor of the author of Dilbert again. Your story was truly painful. You tried to be clever, but did nothing more than throw around random cliches.
12/21/2004 c1 Little Tigger
This is really cute! I enjoyed it emmensly!

Thanks for posting!

:~) LT
4/13/2004 c1 1sacred-soul
*applause* Lovely. That was wonderful. And very true to form.
Poor Dwayne. Poor Dilbert and Alice. I hope she takes Wally's head off.
3/10/2004 c1 10balrogthane
Very nice! Are you going to write some more? :D
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1/13/2004 c1 6Oort
Nice to see some Dilbert stories (slowly) appearing. Good story. You should send the finished version to Mr. Adams. This might not work well in strip form, especially because of size, but it's a great fan story. *_*
fear the fruit
12/29/2003 c1 6Moon Knight Apprentice
That was great, so true to the essence of Dilbert!
12/14/2003 c1 kostya
Good writing. Your charactes are reminisent of the comic. I like the satirical dialogue.
11/8/2003 c1 3mandude
Okay. I do think it's funny, in an odd, twisted, other dimensiony way, but that's not the point. Your story had a extremely twisted but quite good plot.

Other than the fact that you desperatly need spell chuck (just kidding; check) on your computer, you did a marvolous job of keeping the characters as dumb as they usually are.They even had the same personality they normally would! very well done. *mysterious person with one eye gives author a letter bomb* *author explodes*

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