for The St Nick Fix7/11/2012 c6 Guest
Delightful!
Delightful!
1/12/2007 c6 
33trecebo
Leave it to Hannibal to out-think everyone, even the Mob. I love it when a plan comes together.
33treceboLeave it to Hannibal to out-think everyone, even the Mob. I love it when a plan comes together.
1/12/2007 c5 trecebo
You have an excellent set of plots going here. I hope Decker and crew decide to help out the guys...it IS Christmas and all...
You have an excellent set of plots going here. I hope Decker and crew decide to help out the guys...it IS Christmas and all...
1/12/2007 c1 trecebo
Oh, I haven't seen Crystal Lake yet...it is coming up in the que soon. But I can so dig this story. Santa is gonna grant her wish...
Oh, I haven't seen Crystal Lake yet...it is coming up in the que soon. But I can so dig this story. Santa is gonna grant her wish...
7/6/2004 c6 amelia wynters
Nice story! loved the humanization of Decker...and Murdock as an elf. roflol. I can really see that.
Nice story! loved the humanization of Decker...and Murdock as an elf. roflol. I can really see that.
12/24/2003 c5 18Rebelcat
Wonderful job! I love the ending - very sweet! And I really enjoyed where you went with Hannah's character.
(BTW - I've read chapter six, they just wouldn't let me enter a review for it.)
The plot was very fun and nicely constructed. You kind of glossed over the action in just a line or two, and that could be expanded on in your next story. But you did a great job with the characterizations, dialog and humour.
I look forward to reading more from you!
18RebelcatWonderful job! I love the ending - very sweet! And I really enjoyed where you went with Hannah's character.
(BTW - I've read chapter six, they just wouldn't let me enter a review for it.)
The plot was very fun and nicely constructed. You kind of glossed over the action in just a line or two, and that could be expanded on in your next story. But you did a great job with the characterizations, dialog and humour.
I look forward to reading more from you!
12/17/2003 c3 Rebelcat
OK, you made me laugh out loud with the Good-looking Eld, Big, Ugly, Mudsucker Elf, and the Out of his Mind Elf.
You've done a great job with the dialog - very funny! It reminds me of some of the bits from the TV show.
I do wish your chapters were a bit longer, and I have to wonder a bit about Hannah - she's a *very* innocent six. I have both a six and a seven year old, and I don't think they'd buy these guys as the real deal. This age is when kids get into the beginning of logical thinking, and doubt, and challenging the adults around them.
But I like Hannah, regardless. Keep up the great work!
OK, you made me laugh out loud with the Good-looking Eld, Big, Ugly, Mudsucker Elf, and the Out of his Mind Elf.
You've done a great job with the dialog - very funny! It reminds me of some of the bits from the TV show.
I do wish your chapters were a bit longer, and I have to wonder a bit about Hannah - she's a *very* innocent six. I have both a six and a seven year old, and I don't think they'd buy these guys as the real deal. This age is when kids get into the beginning of logical thinking, and doubt, and challenging the adults around them.
But I like Hannah, regardless. Keep up the great work!