for Leela Squared4/22/2006 c5 Dead Composer
I love Futurama and Dr. Who. Are you ever going to continue the story, or is this the end?
I love Futurama and Dr. Who. Are you ever going to continue the story, or is this the end?
7/12/2005 c5 
79Dead Composer
Good cliffhanger. I liked the references to the Who episodes, especially "Nothing will happen to you...ever."
79Dead ComposerGood cliffhanger. I liked the references to the Who episodes, especially "Nothing will happen to you...ever."
5/9/2005 c5 10Trugeta
Wow, that was a good chapter. And a lot has happened. First the Cybermen had to learn how powerful and mighty the Toymaker really is, and how he tortured those Cybermen was really cruel.
Even if he claimed that he's only interested in games it does not justify his actions. They're by no means harmless, and that creature needs to be put into a pocket-dimension from which he can't escape.
That Fry and Leela went down as fast as that was unsurprising considering the might of the toymaker. But what the doctor did was a stroke of genius. He knew that the toymaker wanted him, and only him, and although it looks as if he's dead I'm quite certain that the mysterious woman will bring him back after their dance. My guess is that she is Lady Death, and that she actually only keeps him dead for the duration of the dance.
I only hope that the toymaker won't harm Fry and the two Leelas. Good chapter, update when you can.
10TrugetaWow, that was a good chapter. And a lot has happened. First the Cybermen had to learn how powerful and mighty the Toymaker really is, and how he tortured those Cybermen was really cruel.
Even if he claimed that he's only interested in games it does not justify his actions. They're by no means harmless, and that creature needs to be put into a pocket-dimension from which he can't escape.
That Fry and Leela went down as fast as that was unsurprising considering the might of the toymaker. But what the doctor did was a stroke of genius. He knew that the toymaker wanted him, and only him, and although it looks as if he's dead I'm quite certain that the mysterious woman will bring him back after their dance. My guess is that she is Lady Death, and that she actually only keeps him dead for the duration of the dance.
I only hope that the toymaker won't harm Fry and the two Leelas. Good chapter, update when you can.
5/7/2005 c3 Dead Composer
How did the Doctor avoid getting his mind wiped?
I know what "isomorphic" means, but your application of the word here isn't quite clear.
How did the Doctor avoid getting his mind wiped?
I know what "isomorphic" means, but your application of the word here isn't quite clear.
5/7/2005 c2 Dead Composer
Uh-oh, Nibbler is evil. Or is he?
You may want to reformat this story, as the ellipses (...) have been changed into single periods.
Uh-oh, Nibbler is evil. Or is he?
You may want to reformat this story, as the ellipses (...) have been changed into single periods.
5/7/2005 c1 Dead Composer
Only six reviews so far? That's just criminal. This is a great story, but I don't see why the dialogue needs to be in script format.
Only six reviews so far? That's just criminal. This is a great story, but I don't see why the dialogue needs to be in script format.
3/30/2005 c4 10Trugeta
Very good chapter. I liked the continued history on both the doctor and the doctors Leela. There also seems to be a lot of history between the doctor and this Kronos. I hope this will be explained later (contrary to the doctors wishes^^).
The Cybermen remind me somewhat of the Borg, although the concept of their race is different. I'm curious to see if they'll actually help the doctor and our heroes, as they too have been screwed over by the Toymaker.
It is good to see that you're motivated to write once more. Update when you can.
10TrugetaVery good chapter. I liked the continued history on both the doctor and the doctors Leela. There also seems to be a lot of history between the doctor and this Kronos. I hope this will be explained later (contrary to the doctors wishes^^).
The Cybermen remind me somewhat of the Borg, although the concept of their race is different. I'm curious to see if they'll actually help the doctor and our heroes, as they too have been screwed over by the Toymaker.
It is good to see that you're motivated to write once more. Update when you can.
3/30/2005 c3 Trugeta
Once again a great chapter. It is good to see that the doctor seems to be immune to Nibblers psychic powers and that he managed to make Nibbler see reason. You also did a good job on the background of the doctors Leela.
So the missile was only a bait, huh? But at least the doc and Fry managed to disarm it. I have the suspicion that the missile was sent by the Daleks to get their revenge. Good job, update when you can.
Once again a great chapter. It is good to see that the doctor seems to be immune to Nibblers psychic powers and that he managed to make Nibbler see reason. You also did a good job on the background of the doctors Leela.
So the missile was only a bait, huh? But at least the doc and Fry managed to disarm it. I have the suspicion that the missile was sent by the Daleks to get their revenge. Good job, update when you can.
3/29/2005 c2 Trugeta
That was a good chapter. Good background story on the doctor (I just love the Doc Who series!), and also on the technological details. And finally Fry learns that Nibbler is much more than he thought. I hope this knowledge won't come at the price that it seems.
Nibbler, as an Eternian should recognize that Fry's wishes are more important than anything else, and that keeping him safe like an exhibit in a copied world would be not the same. I hope the doctor can resist Nibblers attack. Good job, reading on.
That was a good chapter. Good background story on the doctor (I just love the Doc Who series!), and also on the technological details. And finally Fry learns that Nibbler is much more than he thought. I hope this knowledge won't come at the price that it seems.
Nibbler, as an Eternian should recognize that Fry's wishes are more important than anything else, and that keeping him safe like an exhibit in a copied world would be not the same. I hope the doctor can resist Nibblers attack. Good job, reading on.
3/26/2005 c1 Trugeta
Very interesting. That's actually the first time I read a Futurama fanfic (have always watched the show, though). Good idea with the Time Lord and while his fellow Gallifreyans allow him to continue his interferences. So it seems that Fry is the apparent future saviour of the universe, huh? I'm curious to see what the danger to the universe could be and will read more once I have the time.
One suggestion though: you shouldn't write the dialogues in script-form. Its better for the story if you write them like in book-form. Otherwise really good work and very creative.
Trugeta.
Very interesting. That's actually the first time I read a Futurama fanfic (have always watched the show, though). Good idea with the Time Lord and while his fellow Gallifreyans allow him to continue his interferences. So it seems that Fry is the apparent future saviour of the universe, huh? I'm curious to see what the danger to the universe could be and will read more once I have the time.
One suggestion though: you shouldn't write the dialogues in script-form. Its better for the story if you write them like in book-form. Otherwise really good work and very creative.
Trugeta.
1/5/2005 c3 19Sci-Fi Raptor
i have no idea about the time lord stuff, but that was really COOL!
who are those people and y havn't u UPDATED!
19Sci-Fi Raptori have no idea about the time lord stuff, but that was really COOL!
who are those people and y havn't u UPDATED!
11/28/2003 c1 1fryfanSpyOrama
Loved it, it was cool reading a different crossover for once. looking forward in reading what happens next. I'm still doing part 3 of my story, but it will be completed eventually
1fryfanSpyOramaLoved it, it was cool reading a different crossover for once. looking forward in reading what happens next. I'm still doing part 3 of my story, but it will be completed eventually