for Stranger In The Shadows12/10/2003 c2 line100
Poor Piper... I'm almost crying... Prue's really sweet though.
Anyway, you updated really fast, hurray for that. And respect for the long chapters, you rock!
Please update like right now...!
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Poor Piper... I'm almost crying... Prue's really sweet though.
Anyway, you updated really fast, hurray for that. And respect for the long chapters, you rock!
Please update like right now...!
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12/9/2003 c2 
2Jawhawk Girl
very good, kinda sad, okay really sad but i like alot. hope ya add more, your doin a great job
2Jawhawk Girlvery good, kinda sad, okay really sad but i like alot. hope ya add more, your doin a great job
12/9/2003 c2 Starring Piper
Koolies, you update fast! I really really liked this chapter, and the way you spaced it this time makes it a lot easier to read. Update soon please!
Koolies, you update fast! I really really liked this chapter, and the way you spaced it this time makes it a lot easier to read. Update soon please!
12/9/2003 c2 9Charmed Writer P4
It might help if your review number if you change your settings to allow anonymous reviews. Good job changing the format (suggested by Starring Piper, hehe, my twin), the second chapter was much easier to read (not content-wise, but it was easier on the eyes. *smiles*)
I really like this story so far, and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I like how affected Prue is about this...it's nice too read other's emotions as well. Piper's my fave, and that makes this even better to read. Please continue soon!
9Charmed Writer P4It might help if your review number if you change your settings to allow anonymous reviews. Good job changing the format (suggested by Starring Piper, hehe, my twin), the second chapter was much easier to read (not content-wise, but it was easier on the eyes. *smiles*)
I really like this story so far, and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I like how affected Prue is about this...it's nice too read other's emotions as well. Piper's my fave, and that makes this even better to read. Please continue soon!
12/9/2003 c1 line100
Great start. Is the bastard gonna attack her again or what's gonna happen?
And won't her sister find out if her wrist is broken or whatever it is?
I need answers!
Please update real soon, the story deserves it! And I do too!
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Great start. Is the bastard gonna attack her again or what's gonna happen?
And won't her sister find out if her wrist is broken or whatever it is?
I need answers!
Please update real soon, the story deserves it! And I do too!
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12/8/2003 c1 clairebear21
Hey this is a great story! I like how you kept the original cast! Keep the chapters coming!
Hey this is a great story! I like how you kept the original cast! Keep the chapters coming!
12/8/2003 c1 Starring Piper
This is really good! The only suggestion I would have is to start a new paragraph every time someone speaks. It makes it easier to read. Other than that, this is great, and I can't wait for an update! Update soon please!
This is really good! The only suggestion I would have is to start a new paragraph every time someone speaks. It makes it easier to read. Other than that, this is great, and I can't wait for an update! Update soon please!
12/8/2003 c1 2Phantom Tippy
AWSOME!THIS STORY ROX SOX MAN! hehe im usually hyper so expect this when i review! Pipers my all time fave character! so i obviously luv this story! if u like Piper based stories check out the 2 of mine-Blind and The Accident (the monkey one is my friends lol) :-p 8-) :-D ^_^
~Alex
2Phantom TippyAWSOME!THIS STORY ROX SOX MAN! hehe im usually hyper so expect this when i review! Pipers my all time fave character! so i obviously luv this story! if u like Piper based stories check out the 2 of mine-Blind and The Accident (the monkey one is my friends lol) :-p 8-) :-D ^_^
~Alex