for Concealed Secrets3/2/2013 c1 kjwinchester
Okay so I have to admit, I wasn't interested in this story whatsoever. The summary is completely different to the 'chapter' that you have posted, and I think you should make it a lot longer, and expand on the story for explanation. That way you can draw more readers into your story.
- Hannah
Okay so I have to admit, I wasn't interested in this story whatsoever. The summary is completely different to the 'chapter' that you have posted, and I think you should make it a lot longer, and expand on the story for explanation. That way you can draw more readers into your story.
- Hannah
4/17/2012 c1 
72bethz2
Heya, I know the chapters are short. It I like it. It's different and really affective. You definatly have to write more :) x
72bethz2Heya, I know the chapters are short. It I like it. It's different and really affective. You definatly have to write more :) x
5/24/2010 c1 telos howe
short. no offence but, what was the point of doing a story that's that short
short. no offence but, what was the point of doing a story that's that short
12/24/2003 c1 4smileyface1314
Why didn't you tell me you had a story up? Well, it's way too short, I even write chapters longer than this. Continue and make Ginny date Draco! Best wishes, :-)!
4smileyface1314Why didn't you tell me you had a story up? Well, it's way too short, I even write chapters longer than this. Continue and make Ginny date Draco! Best wishes, :-)!
12/13/2003 c1 1FroZen In TiMe
Hi kk... it's lilah.. i found your story by accident... innersting...innersting... you should make the chapters longer though...
1FroZen In TiMeHi kk... it's lilah.. i found your story by accident... innersting...innersting... you should make the chapters longer though...
12/11/2003 c1 35HappiGoLucki616
hey! great beginning! i want more soon! or else! *cackles evily* way to go!
35HappiGoLucki616hey! great beginning! i want more soon! or else! *cackles evily* way to go!