for a painfull revenge12/19/2003 c8 
11bigreader
Hey hey hey dont be mean! heres a review for ya pa pa pawease pwease please update soon!:D
~Danni~
11bigreaderHey hey hey dont be mean! heres a review for ya pa pa pawease pwease please update soon!:D
~Danni~
12/19/2003 c8 Verona2
Sorry abour not reviewing. This is a good story so far. So how is Phoebe going to heal? Will her sisters help her? Please update soon!
Sorry abour not reviewing. This is a good story so far. So how is Phoebe going to heal? Will her sisters help her? Please update soon!
12/18/2003 c8 2Tonet
Hey,nice story you have here, forget about your writing mistakes and focus in making your story longer.
You wrote the whole kidnapping and rape in about 200 words. Try to extend your sentences, phrases and ideas. Don´t make them too short. I hope I explained myself. Let me know if you understood, otherwise I'll try my bad spanish.
2TonetHey,nice story you have here, forget about your writing mistakes and focus in making your story longer.
You wrote the whole kidnapping and rape in about 200 words. Try to extend your sentences, phrases and ideas. Don´t make them too short. I hope I explained myself. Let me know if you understood, otherwise I'll try my bad spanish.
12/18/2003 c5 11Twisted Flame
http:/w.seventhsanctum.com/gens/index-name.html Go there. Hopefully the link will work and you can find some evil names...
Great story, btw, keep it up.
Charmed Leo
11Twisted Flamehttp:/w.seventhsanctum.com/gens/index-name.html Go there. Hopefully the link will work and you can find some evil names...
Great story, btw, keep it up.
Charmed Leo
12/18/2003 c7 11bigreader
WOW this can NOT be the end of the story i have to find out what Pheobe will do! please write more!
-danni- :P
11bigreaderWOW this can NOT be the end of the story i have to find out what Pheobe will do! please write more!
-danni- :P
12/14/2003 c3 bigreader
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I am reviewing Please write more chapters!
i love this story u are really good at writing
*probably better than me!*
-danni-
PS: MORE MORE MORE MORE!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I am reviewing Please write more chapters!
i love this story u are really good at writing
*probably better than me!*
-danni-
PS: MORE MORE MORE MORE!
12/14/2003 c2 bigreader
wow thats wierd this is one mean demon i though phebeo was really strong u know like...martial arts and stuff wow...
*amazed*
keep going!
-danni-
wow thats wierd this is one mean demon i though phebeo was really strong u know like...martial arts and stuff wow...
*amazed*
keep going!
-danni-
12/13/2003 c3 11Miranda
Interesting plot-line, but a lot of spelling mistakes. Most computers have a spell check system you can use, the errors distract the reader from the writing. If your computer doesn't have a spell check option try having someone else read it over to help with spelling. Other than that I'm very interested in reading more. Post again soon.
11MirandaInteresting plot-line, but a lot of spelling mistakes. Most computers have a spell check system you can use, the errors distract the reader from the writing. If your computer doesn't have a spell check option try having someone else read it over to help with spelling. Other than that I'm very interested in reading more. Post again soon.