for The Christmas Ball12/31/2003 c8 
1loli-chick336
Lovely story!. so touching... haha anyway keep up the great work!. and I hope to see more stories from you!. and thanks for reviewing my story!. :)
1loli-chick336Lovely story!. so touching... haha anyway keep up the great work!. and I hope to see more stories from you!. and thanks for reviewing my story!. :)
12/30/2003 c8 AlissaL92
WooHoo I'm reviewing ur story! lol it was great but chappies six and seven were kinda mushed together! o well i like the fact that u didn't lay on the harry/ginny to thick (u know i hate that couple)...u should write another story...maybe with some harry/luna? ;) o and make harry CRUSH ginny's heart...ok im just being mean now bye!
Alissa
P.S. I like ur name: quidditch7, eh? lol
WooHoo I'm reviewing ur story! lol it was great but chappies six and seven were kinda mushed together! o well i like the fact that u didn't lay on the harry/ginny to thick (u know i hate that couple)...u should write another story...maybe with some harry/luna? ;) o and make harry CRUSH ginny's heart...ok im just being mean now bye!
Alissa
P.S. I like ur name: quidditch7, eh? lol
12/29/2003 c8 4ShrugDuckie
it was a really good story. it kept me interested, which is saying something! i liked it tho, good job :)
4ShrugDuckieit was a really good story. it kept me interested, which is saying something! i liked it tho, good job :)
12/29/2003 c6 ShrugDuckie
wow, u were right about the emotion thingy. and it was kinda hard to read, but it was still good!
wow, u were right about the emotion thingy. and it was kinda hard to read, but it was still good!
12/29/2003 c5 ShrugDuckie
this is DEFINITELY the best chapter yet! i LOVED it when Ron threw Krum against the wall. i kno i'm a little different, but i would DIE if a guy beat up some1 for me. ok, you can all laff at me now! meanwhile I will be reading the next chapter. o and the thing with Harry and Ginny was soo0o0o0o0o0o0o sweet! this is an awesome story!
this is DEFINITELY the best chapter yet! i LOVED it when Ron threw Krum against the wall. i kno i'm a little different, but i would DIE if a guy beat up some1 for me. ok, you can all laff at me now! meanwhile I will be reading the next chapter. o and the thing with Harry and Ginny was soo0o0o0o0o0o0o sweet! this is an awesome story!
12/29/2003 c3 ShrugDuckie
those two are so cute, i can see that happening too. them being to scared to ask each other i mean. they're too cute! i love 'em to death! onward to the next chappie!
those two are so cute, i can see that happening too. them being to scared to ask each other i mean. they're too cute! i love 'em to death! onward to the next chappie!
12/29/2003 c2 ShrugDuckie
funny stuff, funny stuff. yeah i can easily see Ron cursing, JKR has him do that once and a while in the books and Harry in the 5th one too...*sigh* poor Harry...oh, and Sirius had BETTER be mentioned somewhere in here! *runs off to next chappie*
funny stuff, funny stuff. yeah i can easily see Ron cursing, JKR has him do that once and a while in the books and Harry in the 5th one too...*sigh* poor Harry...oh, and Sirius had BETTER be mentioned somewhere in here! *runs off to next chappie*
12/28/2003 c8 8Black Vengeance
Well, like your other story, I like the story but it's a bit jumpy and hard to understand at times. If you don't already do it, read through each chapter after you've written it so you can tell whether a reader would be able to understand what you mean and whether they can follow it. I think The Talk is a bit too bulky - try spacing out the conversation a bit more with paragraphs.
Well, like I said, I like the story! Keep writing and please don't take my comments in an offensive way!
~Black Vengeance~
8Black VengeanceWell, like your other story, I like the story but it's a bit jumpy and hard to understand at times. If you don't already do it, read through each chapter after you've written it so you can tell whether a reader would be able to understand what you mean and whether they can follow it. I think The Talk is a bit too bulky - try spacing out the conversation a bit more with paragraphs.
Well, like I said, I like the story! Keep writing and please don't take my comments in an offensive way!
~Black Vengeance~
12/27/2003 c1 1gonzogirl
Hay, I just read the story, and loved it. It was so sweet. I love Ron and Hermione stories! Great writing.
1gonzogirlHay, I just read the story, and loved it. It was so sweet. I love Ron and Hermione stories! Great writing.
12/26/2003 c3 hpobsesed
hay y not ron, u r so rude(just kidding) ron+hermione shoud b togrther and dean+parvati and harry+ginny, well if harry asks lavender, it could work out like this: ron+hermione(of corse)
harry+ginny
dean+parvati
lavender+krum
i gonna read more 2 see if im rite
hay y not ron, u r so rude(just kidding) ron+hermione shoud b togrther and dean+parvati and harry+ginny, well if harry asks lavender, it could work out like this: ron+hermione(of corse)
harry+ginny
dean+parvati
lavender+krum
i gonna read more 2 see if im rite