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288H.R.C. Stanley
Pretty interesting. You should continue, maybe Kairi will team up with Oswald the Lucky Rabbit and Darkwing Duck.
288H.R.C. StanleyPretty interesting. You should continue, maybe Kairi will team up with Oswald the Lucky Rabbit and Darkwing Duck.
3/14/2004 c2 9neosun7
This is turning out to be an interesting story! I do hope you continue it!
-Neosun7
9neosun7This is turning out to be an interesting story! I do hope you continue it!
-Neosun7
1/30/2004 c2 18fivethingsunmixed
Dode. Awesome. I'm guessing the implication of a Buffy world was deliberate...right?
Very pretty, even if it is a short chapter. I really wanna see what's gonna happen.
'Flung apart to fight your own battles'? Does this mean Kairi gets to kick ass? *grins*
And of course you can have Zidane. *clicks fingers* *Zidane appears* I always like to help authors start their own harems. ^^
18fivethingsunmixedDode. Awesome. I'm guessing the implication of a Buffy world was deliberate...right?
Very pretty, even if it is a short chapter. I really wanna see what's gonna happen.
'Flung apart to fight your own battles'? Does this mean Kairi gets to kick ass? *grins*
And of course you can have Zidane. *clicks fingers* *Zidane appears* I always like to help authors start their own harems. ^^
1/22/2004 c2 5SilverArcher
Wow, mysterious stuff. Well, I think you did well with Riku's character. The only part that bugged me was when you stated that he would give up his friends.
Then again... he didn't mind leaving his parents. Neither did Sora though... @_@ My head hurts.
Anywho, nicely written, though it was short. About the fact that the boy have all the fun, a little of that is japenese culture. read ranma 1/2 and you see what I mean.
Oh yeah, I have another KH fic, continuing this time.
I await the next chapter! ^_^
5SilverArcherWow, mysterious stuff. Well, I think you did well with Riku's character. The only part that bugged me was when you stated that he would give up his friends.
Then again... he didn't mind leaving his parents. Neither did Sora though... @_@ My head hurts.
Anywho, nicely written, though it was short. About the fact that the boy have all the fun, a little of that is japenese culture. read ranma 1/2 and you see what I mean.
Oh yeah, I have another KH fic, continuing this time.
I await the next chapter! ^_^
1/21/2004 c2 3Lord Ru of Kato
Intereesting consept. I like it and i have to agree there is to little female involment in games. FFX-2 helps alot and your mums right there will be a KH2 if you beat the first onr compleatly you see a trailer for it.
3Lord Ru of KatoIntereesting consept. I like it and i have to agree there is to little female involment in games. FFX-2 helps alot and your mums right there will be a KH2 if you beat the first onr compleatly you see a trailer for it.
12/17/2003 c1 18fivethingsunmixed
Hmm...*strokes imaginary beard, then realises she's a girl* Intriguing...continue, I want to find out what happens. Come on, please! *pouts* I'll give you one of my slaves. *waves at a line of men: Auron, Zell, Irvine, Squall, Riku, Ansem, Sora...* Pick whichever you like! *giggles* Seriously, I really like this story so far. You've managed to give us a major insight into Kairi, as well as her feelings for her two friends. Though I disagree with your potrayal of Riku in the fic; I don't think he was quite as evil as you seem to be making him out to be, but nonethless, it's a matter of opinion. Also, please try and keep your geography straight-I believe the waterfall was on the other side of the island!
18fivethingsunmixedHmm...*strokes imaginary beard, then realises she's a girl* Intriguing...continue, I want to find out what happens. Come on, please! *pouts* I'll give you one of my slaves. *waves at a line of men: Auron, Zell, Irvine, Squall, Riku, Ansem, Sora...* Pick whichever you like! *giggles* Seriously, I really like this story so far. You've managed to give us a major insight into Kairi, as well as her feelings for her two friends. Though I disagree with your potrayal of Riku in the fic; I don't think he was quite as evil as you seem to be making him out to be, but nonethless, it's a matter of opinion. Also, please try and keep your geography straight-I believe the waterfall was on the other side of the island!
12/17/2003 c1 5SilverArcher
I'm glad that someone is doing a rewrite where, yes, Kairi is more than a damsel in distress.
Because if how rare it is to see her as the story goes on, you don't get much of a feel for Kairi's character. I'm sure you'll do a good job in changing this. We'll definatly be seeing more of her now, eh?
^^ You definatly seem to have a feel for this already and you have pinned Riku's character... arrogant. Although I don't think that he would give up his friends to be the best at this point of the game. Mabye later though... he does become quite a pain in the butt as the story goes on. He is a nice person at this point... just too competitive and over-confident. I never really liked Riku anyway.
Lastly, *claps* keep on going! This is a GREAT start.
P.S.: I have a KH fanfic called Blunt. If you have the time, I would like it if you read it and give your imput. You don't have to, but I would love that.
5SilverArcherI'm glad that someone is doing a rewrite where, yes, Kairi is more than a damsel in distress.
Because if how rare it is to see her as the story goes on, you don't get much of a feel for Kairi's character. I'm sure you'll do a good job in changing this. We'll definatly be seeing more of her now, eh?
^^ You definatly seem to have a feel for this already and you have pinned Riku's character... arrogant. Although I don't think that he would give up his friends to be the best at this point of the game. Mabye later though... he does become quite a pain in the butt as the story goes on. He is a nice person at this point... just too competitive and over-confident. I never really liked Riku anyway.
Lastly, *claps* keep on going! This is a GREAT start.
P.S.: I have a KH fanfic called Blunt. If you have the time, I would like it if you read it and give your imput. You don't have to, but I would love that.