for Bloodstains9/30/2005 c2 
9icklebitodd
erm you wrote this ages ago but i have stumbled upon it and wanna no if your gonna do more cos its very good and im all intrgued :P:)
9icklebitodderm you wrote this ages ago but i have stumbled upon it and wanna no if your gonna do more cos its very good and im all intrgued :P:)
7/2/2004 c2 12sarasidle3
hey i want to know what this guy is all about what will nick,cath,warrick,greg and grissom do about sara's involvment in the case plz put chapter 3 up soon plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.thanks for a great read.
12sarasidle3hey i want to know what this guy is all about what will nick,cath,warrick,greg and grissom do about sara's involvment in the case plz put chapter 3 up soon plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.thanks for a great read.
7/2/2004 c2 Fate's Fiddler
HEY! SWEET! i read this story ages ago, and have bin w8ing 4 u 2 upd8 4 ages! but i couldn't memba the title... keep going this story is uber Funky
HEY! SWEET! i read this story ages ago, and have bin w8ing 4 u 2 upd8 4 ages! but i couldn't memba the title... keep going this story is uber Funky
12/18/2003 c1 11ScienceGeek
Nicely begun.
Not only does the plot seem very interesting, the case looks to be as well. I hope that the other CSIs reactions to Agent Carter's revelations will come in the next chapter.
I'm always excited to find new CSI writers who have a good grasp on grammar and language.
11ScienceGeekNicely begun.
Not only does the plot seem very interesting, the case looks to be as well. I hope that the other CSIs reactions to Agent Carter's revelations will come in the next chapter.
I'm always excited to find new CSI writers who have a good grasp on grammar and language.
12/18/2003 c1 nikki-geek03
I can tell this is going to be a really good fic, keep up the good work, and I hope to see some more chapters soon!
I can tell this is going to be a really good fic, keep up the good work, and I hope to see some more chapters soon!
12/18/2003 c1 33LissaJane1121
This is very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to reading more of the story.
33LissaJane1121This is very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to reading more of the story.
12/18/2003 c1 laura27md
This is really good so far! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!
One minor suggestion - it would help to put some 'returns' in the section with dialogue. The conversation would flow a lot better. (sorry if you did and ff messed up the format!)
This is really good so far! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!
One minor suggestion - it would help to put some 'returns' in the section with dialogue. The conversation would flow a lot better. (sorry if you did and ff messed up the format!)
12/17/2003 c1 3Belle Walker
I am very much in agreement with Anansay's review. Your first reviewer, "inagadadavita", has flamed the great works of many fabulous writers, yet hasn't posted a single story of their own at all. Just ignore him/her/it.
Good start with your story. I'm glad to see a new fic by a fellow G/S shipper. Keep up the good work!
3Belle WalkerI am very much in agreement with Anansay's review. Your first reviewer, "inagadadavita", has flamed the great works of many fabulous writers, yet hasn't posted a single story of their own at all. Just ignore him/her/it.
Good start with your story. I'm glad to see a new fic by a fellow G/S shipper. Keep up the good work!
12/17/2003 c1 66Anansay
First of all: ignore inagadadavita. He/She just likes to criticize whatever they can get their hands on. I've yet to see a positive review from them.
Second of all: very interesting premise. And it's always interesting when someone from the past comes back, gives so much opportunity for knowing about certain characters.
Just one small thing: You might want to look into formatting. It's easier to read dialogue when each person's part starts on a different line. :)
U/l to ff.net can be difficult and frustrating when it screws with formatting. If you need any help, just ask! :)
Please continue this story! :)
66AnansayFirst of all: ignore inagadadavita. He/She just likes to criticize whatever they can get their hands on. I've yet to see a positive review from them.
Second of all: very interesting premise. And it's always interesting when someone from the past comes back, gives so much opportunity for knowing about certain characters.
Just one small thing: You might want to look into formatting. It's easier to read dialogue when each person's part starts on a different line. :)
U/l to ff.net can be difficult and frustrating when it screws with formatting. If you need any help, just ask! :)
Please continue this story! :)