for Ai Shiteru, Hitomi!4/24/2007 c7 
3Alexandria Jaganshi
update! PLEASE *whines pitifully* I'm begging you! UPDATE ASAP! PLEASE! *puppy dog eyes*
Oh... shiny... *steals Van's sword and Hitomi's neclace* *cue lightning and thunder*
~AJ~
3Alexandria Jaganshiupdate! PLEASE *whines pitifully* I'm begging you! UPDATE ASAP! PLEASE! *puppy dog eyes*
Oh... shiny... *steals Van's sword and Hitomi's neclace* *cue lightning and thunder*
~AJ~
9/19/2004 c3 Cynthia
Very interesting idea of him being caught by the authorities of Earth. I wonder what he'd think of a jet, seeing as his own planet's summit of technology is a guymelef...
I do wonder how on Earth Van could fly along side a jet, however, those things go hundreds of kilometres a hour...
When you used the word 'hime', that doesn't mean king, it means princess. Oo ?i‰¤?jor kokuoo ?i?‘‰¤?jmean king.
"Boku wa namae no Tomodachi wa Kanzaki, Hitomi desu." means I name's friend is Kanzaki Hitomi.
However: Boku no tomodachi no namae wa Kanzaki Hitomi desu. Means 'My friend's name is Kanzaki Hitomi.'
Very interesting idea of him being caught by the authorities of Earth. I wonder what he'd think of a jet, seeing as his own planet's summit of technology is a guymelef...
I do wonder how on Earth Van could fly along side a jet, however, those things go hundreds of kilometres a hour...
When you used the word 'hime', that doesn't mean king, it means princess. Oo ?i‰¤?jor kokuoo ?i?‘‰¤?jmean king.
"Boku wa namae no Tomodachi wa Kanzaki, Hitomi desu." means I name's friend is Kanzaki Hitomi.
However: Boku no tomodachi no namae wa Kanzaki Hitomi desu. Means 'My friend's name is Kanzaki Hitomi.'
8/18/2004 c7 1Kya77
Another great chapter. I look forward to more. Van getting himself into trouble how typical of him. *lol*
1Kya77Another great chapter. I look forward to more. Van getting himself into trouble how typical of him. *lol*
7/28/2004 c7 kmmgirly
that was really good. it would be good if you wrote longer chapters. well, update soon! can't wait to read more...
that was really good. it would be good if you wrote longer chapters. well, update soon! can't wait to read more...
7/26/2004 c7 Carrie21 when signed in
YAY! NEW CHAPTER! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
I love your story. I really love the stories where Van comes to the Mystic Moon and visits Hitomi! I cant wait to read more. Your doin just a LOVELY job. Very nice.
-Carrie
YAY! NEW CHAPTER! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
I love your story. I really love the stories where Van comes to the Mystic Moon and visits Hitomi! I cant wait to read more. Your doin just a LOVELY job. Very nice.
-Carrie
7/26/2004 c7 Snow Tenshi
...-_-
...Research. That happened in another fiction. *Cringes * Poor Van...Ickies.
...-_-
...Research. That happened in another fiction. *Cringes * Poor Van...Ickies.
5/22/2004 c6 colombian cjick
holy shit she just smacked him
wouldnt you
i know i would
keep on going i want to know what happens next
love, colombian chick
holy shit she just smacked him
wouldnt you
i know i would
keep on going i want to know what happens next
love, colombian chick
5/20/2004 c6 Kya77
*lol rolling on the floor* YES! Go Hitomi, go! Van deserved that after cutting her of only two years away. What he couldn't be patient and trust in their love? I am just hyped to read your next chapter where all will be revealed, hai? Or at least why Van got slaped will be revealed to others. Fun fun fun yeah!
*lol rolling on the floor* YES! Go Hitomi, go! Van deserved that after cutting her of only two years away. What he couldn't be patient and trust in their love? I am just hyped to read your next chapter where all will be revealed, hai? Or at least why Van got slaped will be revealed to others. Fun fun fun yeah!
4/28/2004 c1 alexie
no yeah that was not fair. what is the point in writing in Japanese sheesh we are English not from Japan
no yeah that was not fair. what is the point in writing in Japanese sheesh we are English not from Japan
4/14/2004 c6 chely
Oh Please PLease PLEASE write another chapter I what to know what happens nexts its so cool Please write more chapters!
Oh Please PLease PLEASE write another chapter I what to know what happens nexts its so cool Please write more chapters!
4/13/2004 c4 Carrie21
omg! This is gonna be the greatest story. Like ah! How romantic! Like holy jumpers. I hope you get more chapters up soon...im gonna die if you dont. You have a beautiful way of writing..twould be a shame if you didnt use it to your full advantage. :0)
-Carrie
P.S. *coughMORE!cough*
omg! This is gonna be the greatest story. Like ah! How romantic! Like holy jumpers. I hope you get more chapters up soon...im gonna die if you dont. You have a beautiful way of writing..twould be a shame if you didnt use it to your full advantage. :0)
-Carrie
P.S. *coughMORE!cough*
4/12/2004 c6 13Eternal Nightshade
Very good chapter...However, if I was with you...I would whack you and/or Van in the back of the head. Baan no Baka! I'LL say! _ IDIOT! ...Hitomi no Baka...she slapped Van...
13Eternal NightshadeVery good chapter...However, if I was with you...I would whack you and/or Van in the back of the head. Baan no Baka! I'LL say! _ IDIOT! ...Hitomi no Baka...she slapped Van...
1/26/2004 c5 Eternal Nightshade
YAY! Another chappy! ^_^ I'm so happy I can't feel my face!
Sarah:-_-U
Me:Oh lighten up Sarah! And tell the good writer what you think!
Sarah: ^^ I liked it! I bet Hitomi is none to happy about Van leaving her. Thank you for writing Shinigami-Sama1! I'll be reading too!
Me: And I agree with Sarah, ^_^ on every bit!
P.s that forsaking thing was so sad...*Cries* It's was pretty though...I like it when people use songs in their fictions. ^_^
YAY! Another chappy! ^_^ I'm so happy I can't feel my face!
Sarah:-_-U
Me:Oh lighten up Sarah! And tell the good writer what you think!
Sarah: ^^ I liked it! I bet Hitomi is none to happy about Van leaving her. Thank you for writing Shinigami-Sama1! I'll be reading too!
Me: And I agree with Sarah, ^_^ on every bit!
P.s that forsaking thing was so sad...*Cries* It's was pretty though...I like it when people use songs in their fictions. ^_^