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5/25/2004 c1 5A 29467
Excellent! I really liked it...achingly sad and just excellent overall. I love your talent for focusing on the facial features-it adds a ton of emotion and inherent feeling to the story.
12/21/2003 c1 8All Mighty Terrestrial
That was dead solid perfect. I could hear Sark's voice in my head, completely see him having these thoughts and reactions, and it was a thoroughly enjoyable read. You're brilliant.
12/19/2003 c1 4Jade Symphony
Great writing. I hope I get to read more from you. :)
12/19/2003 c1 3sydfan
Wonderful! I like the way you've captured Sark - his cockiness with a little uncertainty that he just won't show, his condescension towards Sloane, his unspoken desire/respect for Syd. Keep up the good work!
12/19/2003 c1 3Cesium
Great writing. Neat little 'a day in the life of Sark' concept.

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