for The Secret5/1/2006 c3 
8dazzeling diamond
very good! I like Sam, fro sum reason. there are a few typing erros, something to work on and u don't need to use moe than one exclamation mark. other than that, it's great! Everyone is in character to boot. I can totally visualise it, like an episode of the show.
I will try and read more *been busy* when i have sum more time!
also, Aladdin and the Amulet of Time is updated! if ur interested!
8dazzeling diamondvery good! I like Sam, fro sum reason. there are a few typing erros, something to work on and u don't need to use moe than one exclamation mark. other than that, it's great! Everyone is in character to boot. I can totally visualise it, like an episode of the show.
I will try and read more *been busy* when i have sum more time!
also, Aladdin and the Amulet of Time is updated! if ur interested!
4/2/2006 c1 dazzeling diamond
i love charmed! u did great characterization and very good twist already! good work!
i love charmed! u did great characterization and very good twist already! good work!
12/25/2004 c2 2KilyliaRose
Dear superstar,
Way to go, I am so proud of you.
you have done a wonderful job with your writting skills, espically to be your age and to have been through all the things that you have been through in you short lifetime.
keep up the great work and wonderful imagination.
I love you very very much and I will always be here for you no matter what, I am just a phone call away remember that. love you always auntie
2KilyliaRoseDear superstar,
Way to go, I am so proud of you.
you have done a wonderful job with your writting skills, espically to be your age and to have been through all the things that you have been through in you short lifetime.
keep up the great work and wonderful imagination.
I love you very very much and I will always be here for you no matter what, I am just a phone call away remember that. love you always auntie
7/11/2004 c8 9Barbas
Great Story. Very Suspensful. Keep writing... and let me know when you get a new fic up. Can't wait...
TPO3
9BarbasGreat Story. Very Suspensful. Keep writing... and let me know when you get a new fic up. Can't wait...
TPO3
7/10/2004 c8 5Gryffindor620
*sniffle*
This was awesome!
Great Story!
I'm expecting a new story Soon Son!
5Gryffindor620*sniffle*
This was awesome!
Great Story!
I'm expecting a new story Soon Son!
6/29/2004 c7 2WhattaRiot xD
Very interesting story so far! Please update soon; I want to read what happens!
2WhattaRiot xDVery interesting story so far! Please update soon; I want to read what happens!
5/20/2004 c7 Starkeeper
TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH! lol... I like it cuz! Good work... Just goes to show that my little cuz is better then me! *Crys* Oh well... Lol...
love ya!
~Sarah
TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH! lol... I like it cuz! Good work... Just goes to show that my little cuz is better then me! *Crys* Oh well... Lol...
love ya!
~Sarah
1/26/2004 c5 gemstar2
hi,i like ur story line but the atual story...its just a bit starnge hthat sam was givin up so freely form the orphange and she didnt ask questions like;why didnt u coem 4 me b4? she also just accepts the whole witch thing...its like no adjustment period..the typos can get annoying but there is potential
hi,i like ur story line but the atual story...its just a bit starnge hthat sam was givin up so freely form the orphange and she didnt ask questions like;why didnt u coem 4 me b4? she also just accepts the whole witch thing...its like no adjustment period..the typos can get annoying but there is potential