for This is the song that never ends!4/21/2006 c1 emptied3
Ah! Good story, I liked it! (That song drives me nuts, too; try listening to it on a six hour bus drive to camp! AH!)
Ah! Good story, I liked it! (That song drives me nuts, too; try listening to it on a six hour bus drive to camp! AH!)
11/9/2004 c1 
53Visage
Haha! That was wonderful! I absolutely adored the song at the end. Nice job of showing Face and Murdock's relationship. ^_^ Keep up the great work!
~*Visage*~
53VisageHaha! That was wonderful! I absolutely adored the song at the end. Nice job of showing Face and Murdock's relationship. ^_^ Keep up the great work!
~*Visage*~
9/8/2004 c1 1Merry2
First, I think your story is intersting. I'd make a few technical changes to improve it. First, you MUST have a new paragraph for each person's dialogue. Doing this will make it easier for the reader to follow your story. Secondly, you might want to look futher at your the way you seperate your paragraphs. They don't make sense to me. I did enjoy reading your story and hope to see more of your work soon.
1Merry2First, I think your story is intersting. I'd make a few technical changes to improve it. First, you MUST have a new paragraph for each person's dialogue. Doing this will make it easier for the reader to follow your story. Secondly, you might want to look futher at your the way you seperate your paragraphs. They don't make sense to me. I did enjoy reading your story and hope to see more of your work soon.
7/5/2004 c1 amelia wynters
Hehe. Cute story, kinda short. But I liked that you mentioned that they seem to be insepartable (without the slash, if I may add, thank you!). I had that feeling too. I mean, Hannibal seems to respect Murdock and watch over him (well, all 3 of 'em) like a father. Face and Murdock always seemed to have sorta of a brother connection
Hehe. Cute story, kinda short. But I liked that you mentioned that they seem to be insepartable (without the slash, if I may add, thank you!). I had that feeling too. I mean, Hannibal seems to respect Murdock and watch over him (well, all 3 of 'em) like a father. Face and Murdock always seemed to have sorta of a brother connection