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7/3/2007 c1 3Speadee
Good job on their characters! That is so them. Somethings the eyes could be the windows to someone's mind.
4/8/2006 c1 mochi
yay! good fic
12/4/2004 c1 111Nekocin
All I can say is... so Cu~te! and Inui is so... poetic O.o which is a bit weird in my mind. But oh well, I like how his thoughts flowed and the end of it too. :lol: Nice work!
10/25/2004 c1 computer-faerie
^_- Inui and Kaidoh...they have to be the oddest pair I've ever seen (but also the sexiest), he-he, this was cute!
10/11/2004 c1 10akari-hayashi
*waves back Singapore flag* Haha, hi there. Nice to read a PoT fic from a fellow countryman. ^^ Anyway, cute fic! Though Kaidoh is a bit OOC... Never mind la, my Ryoma also very OOC one. *chuckles* Good good, continue writing...
9/28/2004 c1 hannah
yar lor kaidoh eyes damn nice..so cool ^^
1/4/2004 c1 BakaNeko
Yah I like it.. well, its kinda too sweet for me.. But i do like it (How can i resist INUKAI!)
If you have a spare time...
Make a sequel, onegai!
1/1/2004 c1 Officially Retired from Fanfic
oo I definitely feel warm and fuzzy. hehe. I think his eyes are pretty, too.
1/1/2004 c1 Suke-san
Oh O_O it's so sweet. Yes, it's completely sappy. Maybe that's why I like it. ^_^
Hoi, I'm so touched and so honoured that you'd write something and dedicate it to me T_T see how I'm crying? Heh.
I like Kaidoh's response especially. I was so sure he was going to turn red and run away instead.
12/31/2003 c1 4InsaneFuzieBunny
Fwee...it was so short...I loved it..now I COMMAND YOU TO MAKE IT LONGER!

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