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8Lord OF Illusion
I'm not very familiar with this series but this story is very cool. Brandon so far seems to be my favorite character. I really like how your characters also interact with each other, and the dialouge is above average in my book for this site. There seems to be a real story that is evolving, and I think your doing a good job at building that.
8Lord OF IllusionI'm not very familiar with this series but this story is very cool. Brandon so far seems to be my favorite character. I really like how your characters also interact with each other, and the dialouge is above average in my book for this site. There seems to be a real story that is evolving, and I think your doing a good job at building that.
5/11/2006 c10 Wolff
This is an awesome story! I only have one little nit to pick, and that's the use of "thru" for "through" or "threw". It's a pet peeve of mine, and I find it to be distracting from the story. Are you planning on continuing this fic?
This is an awesome story! I only have one little nit to pick, and that's the use of "thru" for "through" or "threw". It's a pet peeve of mine, and I find it to be distracting from the story. Are you planning on continuing this fic?
1/13/2005 c10 4gppr
That was one fast update! And a shocker!
Did Ryan know? I mean... how couldn't he know...
GPPR needs an explanation... :O
4gpprThat was one fast update! And a shocker!
Did Ryan know? I mean... how couldn't he know...
GPPR needs an explanation... :O
1/11/2005 c9 7LisaVang
I'm so glad to be reading this story again. Great action and storyline! Almost like watching a series. Update soon.
7LisaVangI'm so glad to be reading this story again. Great action and storyline! Almost like watching a series. Update soon.
11/24/2004 c3 2TouchedByDarkness
Just started it (three chapers in) and so far I'm impressed. Solid story. Charecters are a bit archtypal for me, but that was a common problem in the Robotech universe.
2TouchedByDarknessJust started it (three chapers in) and so far I'm impressed. Solid story. Charecters are a bit archtypal for me, but that was a common problem in the Robotech universe.
9/8/2004 c8 4gppr
Great chapter, filled with action, mystery and the never-ending tension between R and A. You got me so intrigued. What happened with Angelina's mom? What did the Invid do to her?
4gpprGreat chapter, filled with action, mystery and the never-ending tension between R and A. You got me so intrigued. What happened with Angelina's mom? What did the Invid do to her?
8/11/2004 c7 102YaoiYaoiYeah
wow, another wonderful addition...yes, mecha is my favorite types of action fic, and you did it really really well. I love all the weapons and crafts. it took me to one of my favorite place of imagination...mecha rules! haha.
Anyway, I'm a big action fan, so I put more attention to it. (the action is great here, btw. It just keep getting better) however, I do notice the great angst, humour, drama, romance in this fic too. The characters interactions are great, as if they're real people. You did a wonderful job.
Great Update, you're a great writer.
102YaoiYaoiYeahwow, another wonderful addition...yes, mecha is my favorite types of action fic, and you did it really really well. I love all the weapons and crafts. it took me to one of my favorite place of imagination...mecha rules! haha.
Anyway, I'm a big action fan, so I put more attention to it. (the action is great here, btw. It just keep getting better) however, I do notice the great angst, humour, drama, romance in this fic too. The characters interactions are great, as if they're real people. You did a wonderful job.
Great Update, you're a great writer.
8/6/2004 c7 4gppr
Funny to see tough Angelina as the damsel in distress :D. I like how the tension between her and Ryan is escalating. Cool chapter.
4gpprFunny to see tough Angelina as the damsel in distress :D. I like how the tension between her and Ryan is escalating. Cool chapter.
7/29/2004 c6 gppr
Cool to see Ryan get away. Can't wait to see him get scolded though... lol.
Poor Angelina. Is she in for a rough time? or will Ryan manage to rescue her?
I'm loving the action in your story.
Cool to see Ryan get away. Can't wait to see him get scolded though... lol.
Poor Angelina. Is she in for a rough time? or will Ryan manage to rescue her?
I'm loving the action in your story.
7/27/2004 c5 gppr
I liked the fast-paced battle scenes in the first chapters. The raw descriptions you used made the war setting more real. The characters' initial setup and relationships were also very interesting. Janine and Brandon are cool as a couple. I enjoyed the subtle intertwining with events of the Sentinels story.
The match between Abraham and Ryan was fun to read. The doctor promises to be quite an interesting character. The whole scene between Darmouth and Angelina in chapter four was edgy and exciting . I can't wait to know what went on between those two. At this point I was liking your story more and more.
Breetai's death was an intense moment; cool that you revived it in chapter five. Also the way Angelina went down showed in a rather impressive way her abilities as a warrior. Now I can't wait to see Ryan running to the rescue...
Some minor things: I think it is Kazianna not Karianna, a few long sentences -I do that too ;) and tense changes from past to present.
I think this is a great story and hope you get the time to continue it.
I liked the fast-paced battle scenes in the first chapters. The raw descriptions you used made the war setting more real. The characters' initial setup and relationships were also very interesting. Janine and Brandon are cool as a couple. I enjoyed the subtle intertwining with events of the Sentinels story.
The match between Abraham and Ryan was fun to read. The doctor promises to be quite an interesting character. The whole scene between Darmouth and Angelina in chapter four was edgy and exciting . I can't wait to know what went on between those two. At this point I was liking your story more and more.
Breetai's death was an intense moment; cool that you revived it in chapter five. Also the way Angelina went down showed in a rather impressive way her abilities as a warrior. Now I can't wait to see Ryan running to the rescue...
Some minor things: I think it is Kazianna not Karianna, a few long sentences -I do that too ;) and tense changes from past to present.
I think this is a great story and hope you get the time to continue it.
7/4/2004 c5 102YaoiYaoiYeah
This is a very wonderful story. The cast is very well designed and written, the actions are intense and the story is very interesting. You're a very good writer.
I like this story.
102YaoiYaoiYeahThis is a very wonderful story. The cast is very well designed and written, the actions are intense and the story is very interesting. You're a very good writer.
I like this story.
1/19/2004 c4 7Shinto Red
Hi. The fight scene discription between Abe and Ryan was great. Your writing in general is very good. Now your lack of reviews, in my opinion, has to do with the fact that most people don't usually want to read about made up characters.
They can't connect with them. They want fanfiction that is related to the characters seen on the show ( Otherwise they'd be reading fictionpress). And in most cases I'm like that too unless the writer is talented enough to draw me in ;-) . My one major criticism is that it can get confusing at times trying to remember who is who and what they do. I can assume with time ( menaing future chapters) I'll be able to catch on. Well, hope I've helped and thanks for mentioning me. -SR
7Shinto RedHi. The fight scene discription between Abe and Ryan was great. Your writing in general is very good. Now your lack of reviews, in my opinion, has to do with the fact that most people don't usually want to read about made up characters.
They can't connect with them. They want fanfiction that is related to the characters seen on the show ( Otherwise they'd be reading fictionpress). And in most cases I'm like that too unless the writer is talented enough to draw me in ;-) . My one major criticism is that it can get confusing at times trying to remember who is who and what they do. I can assume with time ( menaing future chapters) I'll be able to catch on. Well, hope I've helped and thanks for mentioning me. -SR