for It Should Have Been Me1/20/2020 c28 CFZ
Good story. I liked it, but no way they lived on Chulak.
Good story. I liked it, but no way they lived on Chulak.
3/17/2019 c7 
6best-life-ever
I'm so confused. Was the guy Jack killed the wrong guy and now the alien government is upset? I thought the assassination was part of the trade agreement. Someone please explain this to me so I don't have to be confused anymore lol. Other than my confusion, I'm really enjoying the story
6best-life-everI'm so confused. Was the guy Jack killed the wrong guy and now the alien government is upset? I thought the assassination was part of the trade agreement. Someone please explain this to me so I don't have to be confused anymore lol. Other than my confusion, I'm really enjoying the story
12/13/2017 c12 user2908637560
This is actually the story that inspired me to write Jack/Hailey pairing. This chapter particularly had JH make sense.
So, if anyone hates me for bringing that pairing into the world, they should go after you instead cause it's your fault! :P
I'm saddened though that the pairing didn't catch on and that other writers didn't join in.
This is actually the story that inspired me to write Jack/Hailey pairing. This chapter particularly had JH make sense.
So, if anyone hates me for bringing that pairing into the world, they should go after you instead cause it's your fault! :P
I'm saddened though that the pairing didn't catch on and that other writers didn't join in.
11/20/2016 c28 Schatze8210
This is another of my favorite stories and I have enjoyed reading it again.
This is another of my favorite stories and I have enjoyed reading it again.
7/9/2016 c28 Guest
I like how you made Sam realize she was a jerk but didn't destroy her character also how you kept Jack, Jack and not a sniffling baby until her brain kicked in. Great story!
I like how you made Sam realize she was a jerk but didn't destroy her character also how you kept Jack, Jack and not a sniffling baby until her brain kicked in. Great story!
9/26/2015 c28 17weezer42
Been reading through your back catalogue and thought it time to review...especially this story, which I enjoyed immensely.
Great action, excellent observation and great interactions between characters. Very happy to add this to my "favourites" list. Now going to read the rest of your excellent stories...
Thank you for sharing your talent...
17weezer42Been reading through your back catalogue and thought it time to review...especially this story, which I enjoyed immensely.
Great action, excellent observation and great interactions between characters. Very happy to add this to my "favourites" list. Now going to read the rest of your excellent stories...
Thank you for sharing your talent...
12/1/2008 c28 2nellstar65
I re-read your story again. It helps me to re-kindle the Sam and Jack romance and action-adventure of the classic SG-1 days as I wait for the third movie and some hope for a big, honkin' resolution!
2nellstar65I re-read your story again. It helps me to re-kindle the Sam and Jack romance and action-adventure of the classic SG-1 days as I wait for the third movie and some hope for a big, honkin' resolution!
10/2/2008 c1 user2908637560
this is damn precise characterisation of Sam: anything, any sacrifice, any victim, is worth it for science and for proving herself right.
You know, this fic actually led me to consider Jack/Hailey relationship, which eventually lead me to write such fics. And I've got to honestly say, Jennifer is a much better match for Jack than Sam, especially in this fic.
Again, a masterpiece of literary work.
this is damn precise characterisation of Sam: anything, any sacrifice, any victim, is worth it for science and for proving herself right.
You know, this fic actually led me to consider Jack/Hailey relationship, which eventually lead me to write such fics. And I've got to honestly say, Jennifer is a much better match for Jack than Sam, especially in this fic.
Again, a masterpiece of literary work.
2/15/2008 c28 christina
wow. took me forever to finish. But i really enjoyed it.
wow. took me forever to finish. But i really enjoyed it.
2/19/2007 c28 5smithcrafter
Sequel possibilities? I think I'll go to your profile page and check for one. This story was VERY good.
5smithcrafterSequel possibilities? I think I'll go to your profile page and check for one. This story was VERY good.
10/18/2006 c27 8skiergal
It appeared that I already reviewed ch 28, so this review is going back to 27...anyway, I just reviewed another story, similar to this, and realized what I wanted to say about this story. It deeply disturbed me, and before you cancel the window, please continue reading. I feel that when a narrative or story disturbs, it stays with the listeners/readers, as this one did for me. I was disgusted with the corruption in the government, but it is a valid, and unfortunately very real problem. And the survival techiniques are horrible, but in a combat situation, have to be overlooked. Now that I've made my peace with this story, I'm done...sry about the long review...
8skiergalIt appeared that I already reviewed ch 28, so this review is going back to 27...anyway, I just reviewed another story, similar to this, and realized what I wanted to say about this story. It deeply disturbed me, and before you cancel the window, please continue reading. I feel that when a narrative or story disturbs, it stays with the listeners/readers, as this one did for me. I was disgusted with the corruption in the government, but it is a valid, and unfortunately very real problem. And the survival techiniques are horrible, but in a combat situation, have to be overlooked. Now that I've made my peace with this story, I'm done...sry about the long review...
10/12/2006 c28 skiergal
That was a strange story, I'll give you, but it was well written. And, the tension between Sam and Jack was very pallable. Nicely done.
That was a strange story, I'll give you, but it was well written. And, the tension between Sam and Jack was very pallable. Nicely done.
6/7/2006 c12 BallsBreaker
this fic, and especially this part has a great potential to become Jack/Jen fic with a few modifications and if it was shortened...
this fic, and especially this part has a great potential to become Jack/Jen fic with a few modifications and if it was shortened...