for PiXie NyXie6/18/2005 c1 asdfasgfasdg
You have GOT to be kidding!
You have GOT to be kidding!
12/29/2004 c1 J.M. Barrie
I second Mister Tolkien's comment.
I second Mister Tolkien's comment.
12/29/2004 c1 
4Elf Cakes
Read the books. It will help.
Learn how to use Microsoft Word or the equivalent- it's not difficult. At your age, you shouldn't be making a lot of the spelling and punctuation mistakes you've made. If you do make them, you should be able to edit them out of your work before posting. I've said it a million times, and I'll say it again: EDIT your work carefully. Read your work three or four times after you've written it. Then find a good beta reader, and send it to him/her. Don't just ignore the red or green squiggle lines that show up while you type in Word- because they *mean* something. No one wants to read something that's so littered with mistakes. No one's expecting perfection, but surely you can do better than this.
Isn't "Nyx" a brand of head lice killing shampoo? Cute name. Heh.
4Elf CakesRead the books. It will help.
Learn how to use Microsoft Word or the equivalent- it's not difficult. At your age, you shouldn't be making a lot of the spelling and punctuation mistakes you've made. If you do make them, you should be able to edit them out of your work before posting. I've said it a million times, and I'll say it again: EDIT your work carefully. Read your work three or four times after you've written it. Then find a good beta reader, and send it to him/her. Don't just ignore the red or green squiggle lines that show up while you type in Word- because they *mean* something. No one wants to read something that's so littered with mistakes. No one's expecting perfection, but surely you can do better than this.
Isn't "Nyx" a brand of head lice killing shampoo? Cute name. Heh.
12/21/2004 c1 Blue Surf
I just love this fic! I really hope you update it.
I just love this fic! I really hope you update it.
6/27/2004 c1 Grumpy
UPDATE, DARN IT!
UPDATE, DARN IT!
5/22/2004 c1 Meghan
Well doesn't Peter sound calm and collected about things. (Please note the use of sarcasam) I loved
that it was really entertaining.
Well doesn't Peter sound calm and collected about things. (Please note the use of sarcasam) I loved
that it was really entertaining.
5/5/2004 c4 Meghan
I adore this story! It's amazing. But maybe I'm
just biased 8-) Please update soon.
Meghan
I adore this story! It's amazing. But maybe I'm
just biased 8-) Please update soon.
Meghan
5/2/2004 c4 IrethAncalime3791
Hey, it's me again. I noticed you haven't updated in a while, and I'm feeling slightly impatient. I hope you aren't getting the negative reviews get to you. Don't listen to all the jerks out there, they're only being so obnoxious because they want attention and the only thing that their minds are on is sick trash.
Anyways, my point is: UPDATE BEFORE YOU'RE OFF MY AUTHOR ALERT!
~Ireth the Self-acclaimed Maia~
PS Don't take it personally, I'm doing this to all the authors who haven't updated my favorite stories for months. I'm just running out of patience, ya know?
Hey, it's me again. I noticed you haven't updated in a while, and I'm feeling slightly impatient. I hope you aren't getting the negative reviews get to you. Don't listen to all the jerks out there, they're only being so obnoxious because they want attention and the only thing that their minds are on is sick trash.
Anyways, my point is: UPDATE BEFORE YOU'RE OFF MY AUTHOR ALERT!
~Ireth the Self-acclaimed Maia~
PS Don't take it personally, I'm doing this to all the authors who haven't updated my favorite stories for months. I'm just running out of patience, ya know?
3/11/2004 c4 Meghan
I just love this more and more. Naughty tree
bothering her while she's bathing!
But WooHoo! Legolas! YEAH!
Can't wait to read the fellowships reaction.
Great Job! Meghan
I just love this more and more. Naughty tree
bothering her while she's bathing!
But WooHoo! Legolas! YEAH!
Can't wait to read the fellowships reaction.
Great Job! Meghan
2/26/2004 c4 Dana
*shoots self* God almighty. No. No. NO. How can this trash pass for fanfiction? HOW? I think you are Michael Jackson.
*shoots self* God almighty. No. No. NO. How can this trash pass for fanfiction? HOW? I think you are Michael Jackson.
2/25/2004 c4 J.R.R. Tolkien
You're mocking me, aren't you?
You're mocking me, aren't you?
2/24/2004 c4 Greeneyes616
hey, another cool chapter, im really liking your story, its original, and creative, keep up the good work:)
~Greeneyes616
hey, another cool chapter, im really liking your story, its original, and creative, keep up the good work:)
~Greeneyes616
2/24/2004 c4 Marpessa
Movie-based horror that is unfit for pigs to roll in. It's ELVES, for the love of Eru! ELVES! Tolkien is HURLING in his grave.
Movie-based horror that is unfit for pigs to roll in. It's ELVES, for the love of Eru! ELVES! Tolkien is HURLING in his grave.