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11/9/2018 c1 Lizzy G
This is very good because it shows us just how human Lore really is. He loves his brother. More than anything. And he loves his father too, there are just a lot of issues there. But Lore's not a complete monster. He's just, complicated. Good story.
5/3/2015 c1 29Pineapple Angel 14
Ooh.. this is so good and totally chilling.. I'm fascinated with Lore's character. He's so "bitter" as your story says.. and yet there is/could be some good there. And yet, he can be totally evil.. As Data would say, very intriguing. Loved the story
12/14/2008 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
A great story. Very good.
10/26/2004 c1 10Eve Robinson
I liked this. It's a very plausible presentation of Lore's thoughts and reactions - emotional, yet cold. Also, nicely written.

Eve
6/27/2004 c1 4TrekPrincess
I like this line here-"I was too alive, so my father took me apart and made him. I was perfect, but he was the favorite."

I am a fan of Lore as well...ah so misunderstood.

"we could be brothers the way I always wanted us to be. Screw your friends on the Enterprise. Screw your career in Starfleet. Come with me, brother. We could be great together."

I quite enjoyed that part as well, I like the way you wrote that, so very much like Lore to think that way, let me know if you write any more about him.
2/4/2004 c1 84PadawanMage
Not bad. I've always wondered what happened to Lore after being beamed out by Crusher..
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Not to be a stickler for details, but it was a Pakled ship that found Lore, not Tellarite..
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Maybe you could fill in what happened to Data after Dr. Soong went to rest before inserting the new chip in Data (well, Lore impersonating Data)...
1/25/2004 c1 17She-Jedi-Siona
SQUEE! *cuddles Lore, gets called a prying little weasel* Lore! I love Lore, and I love your description of him even more. Good job!
~Siona
1/18/2004 c1 2Timeless3
Lore was one of my favourite villians in star trek. He was a lot more complex than people (or writers some times!) give him credit for. I think you have done a great job in keeping Lore very much in character! Great job!
1/10/2004 c1 solidchristian-88
Shall I wait for the goosebumps on my arms to go down before reviewing?
Nah.
This was seriously awsome! A great look into the mind of a chacter that is, in my oppion, the creepiest Star Trek villian ever.
This was toatlly awsome! And a great look at what must've been going through Lore's mind. Just...oh man...Wow.

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