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12/5/2013 c1 Ladyaloysius
Really like this one, even on the second read!
12/6/2006 c1 16novasupernova
love to see the reason why Gibbs can TANGO
1/19/2004 c1 JenniferDeSalme
I just read your story and was wondering if you would continue it. I certainly hope so because it looks like it is going to take a great turn. I can see a Tango between Gibbs and Kate. I can see it now, after hours in the office somehow they'd start to tango. OK, maybe not but it's a thought. I also loved the line at the end "Nothing, the boss and I were talking Life and how to stay among the living." and Gibbs replying "Someday you might just get it right, DiNozzo."
This is great and I can't wait to see how it evolves.
Jenny
1/12/2004 c1 105Raindrops on Roses
Oh... this is going to be a great story-I can just feel it! The dialogue is a bit iffy, though. I liked Tony's line, "The boss and I were just talking Life and how to stay among the living." That is a classic Tony line. However, Gibbs' line, "Yes, I do, but you aren't to say anything," might sound better as "Yeah, I do-but you'd better not say anything." Most people don't speak so properly.
If you have any questions, my e-mail address is in my profile.
-Shannon

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