for Where once was light1/14/2004 c1 Liz O'Brien
Oh, this is really sad, but also very good. May I suggest that when you write dialogue that you should skip down to the next line every time some else is talking. That way it makes it a bit easier to read. Great job! Toodles!
Liz
Oh, this is really sad, but also very good. May I suggest that when you write dialogue that you should skip down to the next line every time some else is talking. That way it makes it a bit easier to read. Great job! Toodles!
Liz
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