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1/14/2004 c1 Liz O'Brien
Oh, this is really sad, but also very good. May I suggest that when you write dialogue that you should skip down to the next line every time some else is talking. That way it makes it a bit easier to read. Great job! Toodles!
Liz
1/14/2004 c1 61Nerweniel
Your story made me cry. Albus losing Minerva is for some reason even MORE sad than Minerva losing Albus... I am crying but I love this story. It's just... "I could never break a promise to my red rose."...

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