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9/30/2012 c1 Ranmaleopard
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
1/19/2008 c2 Sdarian
While I admit that I don't know too much about star wars (as I was never really all that interested in it) from what I know from watching all 6 movies and playing various games, my favorite time period and characters all happen during the time of the game Knights of the Old Republic. Reven was bad ass, and with my ending (dark side of course) he was even better. So, if needing a time period, that is what and when I vote for. Good luck.
7/25/2006 c2 13Ysolde
Interesting idea although not a drkside fan myself. You also have one of my own problems in that you tend to switch tenses in mid paragraph.
6/23/2005 c2 91SotF
Well, for dividers, you can always use the ones in the preview function...or do what I do and have a row as

x

for some reason it counts as a word.

Set it in the New Republic era, pre Vong, or possibly pre-imperial treaty, and the droids can be from a seperatist ship that got stranded in the system...
6/23/2005 c2 2Lord Bishamon
clone wars period that way you still have a jedi order and all that.
6/23/2005 c2 Dr. Masaki
Umm D-Sama I hate to burst your bubble but you got your timeline way screwed up. KOTOR and KOTOR 2 take place 4,0 years before the movies so that makes it about 3,100 years before yoda is born. And the republic has been around for over 20,0 years.
6/23/2005 c1 Dr. Masaki
Well I read your note on whats going to happen next chapter. Now im wondering why is Ranma going along with Genma in the first place let alone allowing him to drag him around like a patsy, Ranma could just get up leave mind control/threaten some important people into helping him set up his own place and start out on his own. What the heck does he care what people will think of him, with the force and all his sith training he can basically do whatever the hell he wants to on earth, I dont see any reason why he would put up with Genma the Tendos or any of that crap in Nerima if he's a Sith he wouldn't bother with it.
6/22/2005 c2 7D-sama
the era should be... right after kotor 2. aka 10 years before the republic and 200 before yoda was born. after revan and after kotor 2. sith renmants are trying to start again because that guy dath nithelius (or sumtin like that) still lives. darth over there ws the embodiment of the dark saide so it figures he cant die.
6/22/2005 c2 2Soul Ice
hmm there arnt realy enough kights in the new jedi order series to fit the bill however the young jedi knights would work perfectly

one shadow acadmey a empier institution trying to create a large number of force weilders to serve the empire

two a decent number of academy students including han and leis twin son and daughter jania and jason a wookie and a damithorian. essentualy a space amazon look up series info for more details
6/22/2005 c2 DAPC
You could place the story in the clone wars era. it has all the elements you need. You could also place it in the Knights of the old Republic but it wouldn't have a droid army.
11/3/2004 c1 5Lone Templar
Very interesting so far. I hope that you will decide to continue this one in the future. Keep up the good work.
1/15/2004 c1 14Sierra-Falls
Hm. Interesting. Write more!
1/15/2004 c1 HolyKnight5
good work. maybe you can mix elements of harry potter in the story, what if some of the most ancient magical families were descendents of Mandalorian commandos and the Dark Arts are in fact remains of Sith Sorcery. in other part... ┬┐what if all the sailor moon story were in good part, a plan of Setsuna to make the sailor scouts vulnerable to the dark side influence?
1/15/2004 c1 Kyoji Saotome
Awesome story, gotta hecka cool idea for Ranma's army. I'm thinking like before Nall Belaron died he infused the Chinese Amazons with Mandalorian DNA and set down training rules, just comparing them to Mandalorians since they are raised for battle.
1/15/2004 c1 7Tamphis
Okay, this is different!
About the army, Once Ranma is fully trained in the use of his Sith powers, would it not be childs play for him to Mind-rape the Musk and phoenix people, thus forcing them to be his slaves? He could also do that to the Amazons, as a sort of mesure of revenge, no? Doing so produces a small army, which could be supported by generations of clonesa at a later date. In addition, he could Dominate the majority of the NWC, making them his personal guard, or at least a bunh of shock-troops.
Anyway, it was just a suggestion.
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