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6/25/2005 c15 AthenaMinerva
It's me again! Love the story. My only suggestion is to make the lapses of time a little more clear, maybe by adding a line or something. I know there's a lot more to this story that you've already posted that I haven't read yet, but I'll get to it soon, I promise! As always, best wishes. ~Athena
6/25/2005 c3 AthenaMinerva
Okay, quick review for this chappy before I finish reading the rest of the story: Can I have a boyfriend like Draco? Pretty please? ;) I like the story so far. There's just one small, teensy, weensy correction: I'm pretty sure it's Blaise Zabini, not Zambini. Sorry, perfectionist (sorta. you wouldn't know it if you saw my messy room.) Alright, now I'll finish reading the story. ;) ~Athena
3/21/2005 c19 paola
i really like the flow of your story its just so interesting heheeü but its short... i hope you make longer chapters hahahaüoh and i like chapter 9 and 14-15 the best [at the moment.. who knows if your gonna make better ones *wink*] anyways thats all i can say for now ü

see how im sso into your story right now? so please update fastü ill be waiting ühahaü
9/4/2004 c19 Pinky-Zinky
Sweet
9/4/2004 c19 10SOBs 4 Sirius 223
cool. please update asap. that last update took forever. thanks. bye.
9/3/2004 c19 20Mrs Hatake Itachi
What a short chapter and a long wait hope you'll put a long chapter and you'll update soon.
9/2/2004 c1 kendra21
good story! keep up the good work!
9/2/2004 c19 1I'm still Drizzy
I love it. The twists and turns are great. I personally think Draco's being a little to 'open' about his dad and everything. That would be my only word of advice to you. Everything else is great and I ORDER you to keep writing! I want to see the next chapter!
9/2/2004 c19 5CCinderellaa
Short, but atleast its good. Update soon.
7/28/2004 c18 32prin69
oh, that was a big ouch. love the story!
7/2/2004 c18 20Mrs Hatake Itachi
It's nice be waiting for the next chappy hope you update soon.
6/27/2004 c18 10SOBs 4 Sirius 223
this is really cool, but they need to get together, or back together, or whatever. please update asap. thanks. bye.
6/26/2004 c18 5CCinderellaa
Poor Hermione! Update soon. :-)
6/24/2004 c17 Charity
I love this story, please update soon!
6/4/2004 c17 heartangel
heyo! hi... I liked your story so much! hope u can finish it soon! i'd like to read the ending plsplsplspls! i love it! more powers!
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