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2/7/2004 c1 70Lady Razorsharp
Oh, this HURT it was so good. It was all those tiny moments that made it so good. And the way you included the words were perfect. Bravo!
2/2/2004 c1 12PimpMasta Popo
interesting. There aren't enough Spike/Julia fics out there. Kudos ro you for writing one. This is good, I'd look forward to more. Possibly, would you explain why the Shoelaces is a great thing?
1/30/2004 c1 6Brigidforest
that was absolutely delightful. the touch of the street light making her seem like an angelic figure was just so perfect for Julia, especially in Spike's eyes. I enjoyed this so much. :D
1/29/2004 c1 6Nikira
Good story. I really liked the way you didn't keep it too light or too dark. There was a good balance with smooth, true-to-form dialogue. I'll be sure to check out your other stories.
1/28/2004 c1 sir edward baka sama
Man, that was good! I loved how you made Spike out to be this guy that was always cool and calm, exceot for when it came to his shoelaces. You described Julia perfectly that it made this story blend seamlessly with the series. I think you've done an amazing story. Bravo!

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