for The Awakening Power7/4 c34 Finnspa23
I doubt you still see these reviews, but I wanted to say thanks for a great story! I really enjoyed the whole thing.
I doubt you still see these reviews, but I wanted to say thanks for a great story! I really enjoyed the whole thing.
5/15 c4 Guest
I'll just get Bill Weasley to sign as a witness before I leave.
Fyi for chance of witnessing in future fics or RL. THE WITNESS is signing they witnessed the primary signer SIGNING.
A slight help in say, preventing a witness from signing a document with forged signatures. Eg. Having a lot of time to imitate/fake a signature, easier than a "live" quick signing.
It's also if possible, to be verifying, witness signing that the names of other signatures were signed [identified] as being the persons named by said signatures.
A notary public would attempt to verify identification that the signers' signatures ARE the persons named by said said signatures.
I'll just get Bill Weasley to sign as a witness before I leave.
Fyi for chance of witnessing in future fics or RL. THE WITNESS is signing they witnessed the primary signer SIGNING.
A slight help in say, preventing a witness from signing a document with forged signatures. Eg. Having a lot of time to imitate/fake a signature, easier than a "live" quick signing.
It's also if possible, to be verifying, witness signing that the names of other signatures were signed [identified] as being the persons named by said signatures.
A notary public would attempt to verify identification that the signers' signatures ARE the persons named by said said signatures.
4/28 c34 Now Account
Nice, you made some great points there. Kinda glossed over the whole building power bit though.
Nice, you made some great points there. Kinda glossed over the whole building power bit though.
4/20 c34 Guest
Good story as far as it goes but simply typing "The End" doesn't make the story "Complete" when there is still 20 percent or more left undone. Still, thanks.
Good story as far as it goes but simply typing "The End" doesn't make the story "Complete" when there is still 20 percent or more left undone. Still, thanks.
4/20 c26 Guest
Here's your apology, take it or leave it.
Harry fulfilled his promise to Dumbledore by apologizing. Malfoy learned NOTHING from the episode and deserves another hex far more than he deserves to publicly humiliate Harry. As far as evening the score...absolutely nothing is going to change as they battle out their remaining time at Hogwarts.
Here's your apology, take it or leave it.
Harry fulfilled his promise to Dumbledore by apologizing. Malfoy learned NOTHING from the episode and deserves another hex far more than he deserves to publicly humiliate Harry. As far as evening the score...absolutely nothing is going to change as they battle out their remaining time at Hogwarts.
4/20 c26 Guest
So if Dumbledore had personal experience with a carbon copy of Malfoy and it inspires shame over 100 years later, HOW can he FAIL to see the parallel and sit on his throne watching the exact same circumstances repeat time and again with Malfoy approaching the Gryffindor table to stir the pot. I say DUMBLEDORE has failed all his students, especially Harry, and bears much blame for allowing events to unfold when he could easily intervene as is his duty. This is only one of many examples in fanfic and in canon where Dumbledore wastes his wisdom and authority. Not much of a leader. Not much of a Headmaster. Not much help to Harry.
So if Dumbledore had personal experience with a carbon copy of Malfoy and it inspires shame over 100 years later, HOW can he FAIL to see the parallel and sit on his throne watching the exact same circumstances repeat time and again with Malfoy approaching the Gryffindor table to stir the pot. I say DUMBLEDORE has failed all his students, especially Harry, and bears much blame for allowing events to unfold when he could easily intervene as is his duty. This is only one of many examples in fanfic and in canon where Dumbledore wastes his wisdom and authority. Not much of a leader. Not much of a Headmaster. Not much help to Harry.
7/18/2022 c34 
4Leapyearbaby29
Lol. Snape being mad at the end. How did Dumbledore set Snape up exactly? Unless it was his idea for the duel and he knew Harry would win. I love that the Dursley’s were shocked by how rich Harry was. And I love that Harry took them to Greece! And Percy came along! Thank god! I hope there’s a sequel! We need to see Harry defeating Voldemort! Great story! It was certainly eventful! :)
4Leapyearbaby29Lol. Snape being mad at the end. How did Dumbledore set Snape up exactly? Unless it was his idea for the duel and he knew Harry would win. I love that the Dursley’s were shocked by how rich Harry was. And I love that Harry took them to Greece! And Percy came along! Thank god! I hope there’s a sequel! We need to see Harry defeating Voldemort! Great story! It was certainly eventful! :)
7/18/2022 c33 Leapyearbaby29
I’m so happy Hermione and Ginny got Sirius’ diary for Harry. So…was Lucius ever found? Lol. And I’m very surprised Harry has Voldemort’s new wand. So it was tuned to Harry and every spell that came out of it was more powerful? Love that the whole Weasley family plus Hermione saw Ginny and Harry cuddled up. Lol. Love that it’s common knowledge that Harry won the duel and severed Voldemort’s arm. Snape is proud of Harry deep down. ;)
I’m so happy Hermione and Ginny got Sirius’ diary for Harry. So…was Lucius ever found? Lol. And I’m very surprised Harry has Voldemort’s new wand. So it was tuned to Harry and every spell that came out of it was more powerful? Love that the whole Weasley family plus Hermione saw Ginny and Harry cuddled up. Lol. Love that it’s common knowledge that Harry won the duel and severed Voldemort’s arm. Snape is proud of Harry deep down. ;)
7/18/2022 c32 Leapyearbaby29
Damn. Wtf was that spell thst Harry cast at the end? He cut of Voldemort’s wand arm! That’s huge! And Voldemort has pink blood? So the goblins got pieces of the five of them for poly juice potions from Voldemort? How did Voldemort have pieces of Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, and Remus? I’m glad Bill was working that day! Wonder where Ragnok is. So is Sirius’ diary there?
Damn. Wtf was that spell thst Harry cast at the end? He cut of Voldemort’s wand arm! That’s huge! And Voldemort has pink blood? So the goblins got pieces of the five of them for poly juice potions from Voldemort? How did Voldemort have pieces of Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, and Remus? I’m glad Bill was working that day! Wonder where Ragnok is. So is Sirius’ diary there?
7/18/2022 c31 Leapyearbaby29
Harry didn’t tell them about the prophecy. He has to be the one who kills Voldemort. And if he bested Dumbledore in a round, he can damn well kill Voldemort. Voldemort doesn’t know how powerful Harry is. What the heck at the goblins mining? And this is under Gringotts? There’s a dragon there too. Well at least in the books and movies. Thank god those were fake wands that were snapped. But the Elder Wand could’ve repaired the wands if they were real.
Harry didn’t tell them about the prophecy. He has to be the one who kills Voldemort. And if he bested Dumbledore in a round, he can damn well kill Voldemort. Voldemort doesn’t know how powerful Harry is. What the heck at the goblins mining? And this is under Gringotts? There’s a dragon there too. Well at least in the books and movies. Thank god those were fake wands that were snapped. But the Elder Wand could’ve repaired the wands if they were real.
7/17/2022 c30 Leapyearbaby29
If Harry hadn’t gotten the money from Sirius Will, it would’ve gone to Bellatrix and Narcissa AND Andromeda, Tonks’ mom. She’s the third sister of the three Black Sisters. Not Lucius. So you can block the killing curse with a physical object. Interesting. Also, Hogwarts robes have buttons. They aren’t like hoodies where you pull them over your head. And I thought they had to wear slacks and a button down shirt as well as a sweater vest? But they can wear Muggle pants and t-shirts? I love that Harry and Ginny talked. I love them so much! Harry having to take his robes and shirt off in the Great Hall was amusing. As was when Dumbledore and Harry both signed at the same time. I forgot to mention, but Snape’s nod at Harry in the last chapter was nice. So the diary is in the Black Family Vault?
If Harry hadn’t gotten the money from Sirius Will, it would’ve gone to Bellatrix and Narcissa AND Andromeda, Tonks’ mom. She’s the third sister of the three Black Sisters. Not Lucius. So you can block the killing curse with a physical object. Interesting. Also, Hogwarts robes have buttons. They aren’t like hoodies where you pull them over your head. And I thought they had to wear slacks and a button down shirt as well as a sweater vest? But they can wear Muggle pants and t-shirts? I love that Harry and Ginny talked. I love them so much! Harry having to take his robes and shirt off in the Great Hall was amusing. As was when Dumbledore and Harry both signed at the same time. I forgot to mention, but Snape’s nod at Harry in the last chapter was nice. So the diary is in the Black Family Vault?
7/17/2022 c29 Leapyearbaby29
WOW! This was bloody fantastic! Just marvelous! The duel was amazing! I’m so happy Harry song a round against Dumbledore! And NOBODY has ever done that before! Malfoy can’t say Harry’s a fraud anymore. He just bested one of he most powerful sorcerer’s in the world. And he duel ended in a draw. Like wow! “Harry saw Madam Pomfrey enter the Hall, lugging a very large trunk with "Portable Healing Kit" on the side. She was looking very grim, which lasted until she glanced at Harry, at which time her face fell into an expression of downright dread. Harry felt himself grow short of breath.” I laughed at this part. Harry should have a bed dedicated to him with a plaque already. Lol. Love that Pomfrey was worrying over Dumbledore and his incorrectly “fixed” bone. Lol. Well, if Harry can best Dumbledore in a round, Harry can certainly best Voldemort. Especially with his signature “Expelliarmus” spell. ;) God when Dumbledore and Snape were furiously talking strategies, I laughed. No longer was Dumbledore a professor or a headmaster, he was Harry’s opponent. I loved when Harry spoke parsletongue to the serpent. And everyone saw him do it. Pretty neat. God, this was just so entertaining. I’m glad Dumbledore proposed this to Harry. I wonder if there was another intention behind it. Harry seemed to have let out a lot of his frustration with controlled spells. Maybe Dumbledore knew he needed a release and made it into something fun? Great chapter. :)
WOW! This was bloody fantastic! Just marvelous! The duel was amazing! I’m so happy Harry song a round against Dumbledore! And NOBODY has ever done that before! Malfoy can’t say Harry’s a fraud anymore. He just bested one of he most powerful sorcerer’s in the world. And he duel ended in a draw. Like wow! “Harry saw Madam Pomfrey enter the Hall, lugging a very large trunk with "Portable Healing Kit" on the side. She was looking very grim, which lasted until she glanced at Harry, at which time her face fell into an expression of downright dread. Harry felt himself grow short of breath.” I laughed at this part. Harry should have a bed dedicated to him with a plaque already. Lol. Love that Pomfrey was worrying over Dumbledore and his incorrectly “fixed” bone. Lol. Well, if Harry can best Dumbledore in a round, Harry can certainly best Voldemort. Especially with his signature “Expelliarmus” spell. ;) God when Dumbledore and Snape were furiously talking strategies, I laughed. No longer was Dumbledore a professor or a headmaster, he was Harry’s opponent. I loved when Harry spoke parsletongue to the serpent. And everyone saw him do it. Pretty neat. God, this was just so entertaining. I’m glad Dumbledore proposed this to Harry. I wonder if there was another intention behind it. Harry seemed to have let out a lot of his frustration with controlled spells. Maybe Dumbledore knew he needed a release and made it into something fun? Great chapter. :)
7/17/2022 c28 Leapyearbaby29
Damn. This was fantastic! I also forgot to comment that I loved Dobby’s gift to Harry for Christmas of the picture of Harry and Ginny feeding themselves strawberries. Lol. And Draco got caught! Nice! At first I was confused when you said Draco knew Harry wouldn’t try to catch the snitch at the score Gryffindor was leading 140-80. I was confused because they would win the game if it was caught. But then realized that the Cup is determined in how many points each team has so they wanted to rack up more points. Damn. They won by ten points I’m assuming.
Damn. This was fantastic! I also forgot to comment that I loved Dobby’s gift to Harry for Christmas of the picture of Harry and Ginny feeding themselves strawberries. Lol. And Draco got caught! Nice! At first I was confused when you said Draco knew Harry wouldn’t try to catch the snitch at the score Gryffindor was leading 140-80. I was confused because they would win the game if it was caught. But then realized that the Cup is determined in how many points each team has so they wanted to rack up more points. Damn. They won by ten points I’m assuming.
7/17/2022 c27 Leapyearbaby29
Thank god they’ve kissed! I’m glad Harry apologized to Ginny. And Draco really ruined his broom that Harry just tuned and polished. Damn. How do you tune a broom? Love that everyone was sending Harry notes of encouragement and notes to annoy Draco. Lol. I’m glad Ginny faced her fears. :)
Thank god they’ve kissed! I’m glad Harry apologized to Ginny. And Draco really ruined his broom that Harry just tuned and polished. Damn. How do you tune a broom? Love that everyone was sending Harry notes of encouragement and notes to annoy Draco. Lol. I’m glad Ginny faced her fears. :)