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6/27/2009 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
A great story. Very good.
2/20/2004 c1 dafyid
It brought tears to my eyes.
1/30/2004 c1 Levi Fiction
Still a great story. Okay I'll admit this time I cried a bit. I've been doing that alot lately, apparently after bottling it up it tends to gush out from time to time. It is well written, very understanding of death and life. Short, but perfect in its simplicity. The only critiuq I have, and I don't expect a fix, is that I'm not sure. I'm not sure if this is something that should be there, or could be but definatly not required. It's perfect to hear what Jonny has to say on the subject, and interesting to see him writing it in a journal. Maybe he COULD, stress the word could didn't use should, have been shown to be writing in the journal at the beginning as well. More of a descriptive introduction to what was happening. But it is sweet, and it works just as it is. So, good job. HOpe to see more stories from you. Later days.

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