2/12/2018 c7 Warswrath
Heh even if he gets Erika I still took 201 and one photos because metabee shot the other 200
Heh even if he gets Erika I still took 201 and one photos because metabee shot the other 200
7/19/2013 c7 eeveetrainer101
Great fic you should make a second one.
Great fic you should make a second one.
6/30/2009 c7 megarock1018
dude!
sequal! sequal! sequal! sequal! sequal! sequal!
this story is just way too good to rest!
dude!
sequal! sequal! sequal! sequal! sequal! sequal!
this story is just way too good to rest!
2/29/2008 c7 1JamesRKS
i love this story i cant think of words that describe it please continue this fanfic
i love this story i cant think of words that describe it please continue this fanfic
3/4/2007 c4 Guest
The story's awesome, but you're just ruining it with your horrible "Your" and "Their" mistakes.
Ever heard of "you're" or "they're".
The story's awesome, but you're just ruining it with your horrible "Your" and "Their" mistakes.
Ever heard of "you're" or "they're".
7/20/2005 c7 rothus17
im still wetin for a flashback for what erica and brass thogt wen they lost ther virginity,and a new chapter to see what brass thinks of metabee new body
im still wetin for a flashback for what erica and brass thogt wen they lost ther virginity,and a new chapter to see what brass thinks of metabee new body
7/8/2005 c1 rothus17
i love it bot i want to know what dos Earica and brass think or do wen they think abut what they did for the first time and wat dos brass thinks abaut metalbee new body from the second sesan.
i love it bot i want to know what dos Earica and brass think or do wen they think abut what they did for the first time and wat dos brass thinks abaut metalbee new body from the second sesan.
7/7/2005 c1 jonathan f stoll
i read it all and i became ure bigest fan...well i think u shud write abaut what brass thinks of metalbee new body from the secand seson...please keep writin a continiu of this story . and when u pretend to tolk to metalbee i think is cool.well i hope u keep writing this story give some diteals of brass and metalbee doing it.well than u for readin my review.
i read it all and i became ure bigest fan...well i think u shud write abaut what brass thinks of metalbee new body from the secand seson...please keep writin a continiu of this story . and when u pretend to tolk to metalbee i think is cool.well i hope u keep writing this story give some diteals of brass and metalbee doing it.well than u for readin my review.
8/3/2004 c7 thai-spirit
hi david im...guessing u no hi dis is... u dont...den u suk(JK...) anyways good story..havent logged inta fanfiction in months...godd luk and keep writing!
hi david im...guessing u no hi dis is... u dont...den u suk(JK...) anyways good story..havent logged inta fanfiction in months...godd luk and keep writing!
3/18/2004 c7 Goodpeeple
This was a wicked story man, I cried laughing at some parts. It's exactly what I'm looking for; humor, intimidation, and people getting "intimate". Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Still laughing the crap out of himself,
Goodpeeple
This was a wicked story man, I cried laughing at some parts. It's exactly what I'm looking for; humor, intimidation, and people getting "intimate". Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Still laughing the crap out of himself,
Goodpeeple
3/17/2004 c7 6Warrior of Virtue
That was magnificent. Make a sequel. Karin and Kogi getting their revenge could be a good fic.
That was magnificent. Make a sequel. Karin and Kogi getting their revenge could be a good fic.
3/16/2004 c7 517Zarius
Aw damn..it's ended, BUT the door is openm for a sequel,. this was a very well written and developed fanfic about the greatest couple on Medabots.
The "did they use proection?" question could come back to bite Erica in the ass though..if you EVER write a sequel, it should deal with Erica relasing Ikki made her pregnant...considering the age and the like.
Either way, you should be proud of this work
Aw damn..it's ended, BUT the door is openm for a sequel,. this was a very well written and developed fanfic about the greatest couple on Medabots.
The "did they use proection?" question could come back to bite Erica in the ass though..if you EVER write a sequel, it should deal with Erica relasing Ikki made her pregnant...considering the age and the like.
Either way, you should be proud of this work