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4/2/2004 c2 4DarkHrse
You have written an excellent story! In just this chapter alone, you have given vivid life to your two protagonists, Venris and Diradem. And the plot is not half bad either. I spotted a few typos but it was so minor and didn't distract at all.
I hope you update soon. This is a story worth telling and you have the prerequisite talent to pull it off. Thanks for sharing!
3/26/2004 c2 29Karashi
Me: Wai! XD XD XD Where's Chappie one? Postie soon! :D
2/20/2004 c1 4Aimura
o_o
This isn't finished - it can't be, right?
You have created intricately interesting characters- especially Venris, I should say so. She seems to be the epitome of sorrowful wealth. XP Don't mind what I say of Venris. I am particularly impressed with her thinking.
Keep on writing!

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