for Harry Potter and the Magnificent Seven Revised1/25 c32 wiebenor
I do kinda wish there would be more to the final chapter, like for instance, phoenix team being "dead", but actually being alive somewhere, as opposed to what little actually happens, but oh well...
Don't get me wrong though, it's a great story mixing muggle and magical weaponry and tactics, despite the sad-ish ending... Definitely following and favoriting this story as it definitely deserves to be in my list for more easily finding it again if I ever want to. Of course, I do hate a story where Harry and Ginny have sex then promptly die, because that kinda defeats the purpose of having sex, as it leaves Harry without any kids, and let's face it, I just can't stop getting emotional if and/or when Harry and Ginny (or whoever the girlfriend is) permanently die... Temporary death I can live with easily, but permanent death (in or right after the big battle) is just sooo hard to justify for me, because out of everyone, Harry and Ginny deserve to live the most of everyone, Harry because of the many times of beating Voldemort, and Ginny, for the chamber, and for sticking by Harry through thick and thin, and both, for their childhood innocence lost at an early age...
I do kinda wish there would be more to the final chapter, like for instance, phoenix team being "dead", but actually being alive somewhere, as opposed to what little actually happens, but oh well...
Don't get me wrong though, it's a great story mixing muggle and magical weaponry and tactics, despite the sad-ish ending... Definitely following and favoriting this story as it definitely deserves to be in my list for more easily finding it again if I ever want to. Of course, I do hate a story where Harry and Ginny have sex then promptly die, because that kinda defeats the purpose of having sex, as it leaves Harry without any kids, and let's face it, I just can't stop getting emotional if and/or when Harry and Ginny (or whoever the girlfriend is) permanently die... Temporary death I can live with easily, but permanent death (in or right after the big battle) is just sooo hard to justify for me, because out of everyone, Harry and Ginny deserve to live the most of everyone, Harry because of the many times of beating Voldemort, and Ginny, for the chamber, and for sticking by Harry through thick and thin, and both, for their childhood innocence lost at an early age...
6/1/2014 c5 Guest
Wow... Talk about " whoosh!"
Wow... Talk about " whoosh!"
6/6/2010 c5 chat noire
Wow, that was amazingly cheesy and not at all like Harry and Ginny. 'I think I'm falling for you' Seriously? Could you write a more idiotic line? Honestly what 14/15 year old do you honestly know that would say something as dumb as that? I'm honestly considering not continuing to read this so far you're fic. seems to be just a love fest with no plot. . . .
Wow, that was amazingly cheesy and not at all like Harry and Ginny. 'I think I'm falling for you' Seriously? Could you write a more idiotic line? Honestly what 14/15 year old do you honestly know that would say something as dumb as that? I'm honestly considering not continuing to read this so far you're fic. seems to be just a love fest with no plot. . . .
12/1/2009 c32 
19chaostheory1989
This was a good story, but it's spoiled by the littering of errors. Florish and Blotts is a book store, Fortescue's is the ice cream shop. The SAS do not have a base called The SAS Base, they are based (while in England) in the army base of Hereford.
Keep an eye on homophobes, the one I can remember is when Harry had Malfoy strapped to the chair you wrote "That's my name don't where it out" the where in this is a locational word (Where will it end?) what you needed is wear.
Get a beta, and a brit picker, since such mistakes are invisible to most Americans but glaringly obvious to a Brit.
It is a good story though, and it was enjoyable to read.
19chaostheory1989This was a good story, but it's spoiled by the littering of errors. Florish and Blotts is a book store, Fortescue's is the ice cream shop. The SAS do not have a base called The SAS Base, they are based (while in England) in the army base of Hereford.
Keep an eye on homophobes, the one I can remember is when Harry had Malfoy strapped to the chair you wrote "That's my name don't where it out" the where in this is a locational word (Where will it end?) what you needed is wear.
Get a beta, and a brit picker, since such mistakes are invisible to most Americans but glaringly obvious to a Brit.
It is a good story though, and it was enjoyable to read.
5/17/2009 c32 1Purple Fire Lily
This story is very good, not exatly brilliant,but very good. Love the ending.
1Purple Fire LilyThis story is very good, not exatly brilliant,but very good. Love the ending.
5/9/2009 c32 2belle and the beast
i'm not going to say "i hate you" or "your stories suck cause you killed them" I going to say...
...that was THE BEST HARRY POTTER FANFICTION I'VE EVER READ!:)
2belle and the beasti'm not going to say "i hate you" or "your stories suck cause you killed them" I going to say...
...that was THE BEST HARRY POTTER FANFICTION I'VE EVER READ!:)
5/9/2009 c1 belle and the beast
so let me get this right Phoenix=harry, Owl=hermionie, Fox=ron, Unicorn=ginny, lions=Fred&gorge, wolf=neville, but is luna lovegood in this story? and did you use thier corpereal patronus figures on all but harry? gust curious, not a good habit of mine, but yeah:)
so let me get this right Phoenix=harry, Owl=hermionie, Fox=ron, Unicorn=ginny, lions=Fred&gorge, wolf=neville, but is luna lovegood in this story? and did you use thier corpereal patronus figures on all but harry? gust curious, not a good habit of mine, but yeah:)
4/11/2009 c32 rankokunalpha1
damn i love the story but why do the good guy's always die at the end who fight the final battle! keep up the awesome writing!
damn i love the story but why do the good guy's always die at the end who fight the final battle! keep up the awesome writing!
12/27/2008 c32 Beth5572
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri