for Stare11/9/2010 c1 HomicidalMiz-Ari777
wtf, Zarla? Ugh, i just love your stuff way too much... yet it always depresses me in the end. Why does one of em always die? XD
wtf, Zarla? Ugh, i just love your stuff way too much... yet it always depresses me in the end. Why does one of em always die? XD
7/28/2010 c1 Turquoise.ebonyfox
*Wince* Wow, lovely, Edgar. Of course he would be lying if he said, "No" and who knows, maybe Johnny would have killed him anyway.
I like Scriabin's sarcastic humor though. XD
"I'm pleased with you my son."
"Shut up."
That was one of my favorite parts.
*Wince* Wow, lovely, Edgar. Of course he would be lying if he said, "No" and who knows, maybe Johnny would have killed him anyway.
I like Scriabin's sarcastic humor though. XD
"I'm pleased with you my son."
"Shut up."
That was one of my favorite parts.
8/11/2009 c1 
1Reginleifthevalkyrie
I just lost my sense of up and down. Gravity is off, down is at a strange angle now, literally, physically, I feel that right now. Beautiful beyond measure.
1ReginleifthevalkyrieI just lost my sense of up and down. Gravity is off, down is at a strange angle now, literally, physically, I feel that right now. Beautiful beyond measure.
8/10/2009 c1 Mysticpast
sry I'm not logged in at the moment
I loved this story! this is my favorite nny/edgar story ever!
sry I'm not logged in at the moment
I loved this story! this is my favorite nny/edgar story ever!
6/12/2009 c1 Infideles
Johnny - I.. LOVE U..(why yees, I think I do)
Scriabin- you're screwed man, SCREWED!
Edgar - *gasp*I luv youu too!1
Scriabin - u gonna die- HE'S A GONNA KILL U
Johnny - *shove*
Edgar - ahh- *spat*
This relationship is rather screwy... (who'd a thunk it?)
Johnny - I.. LOVE U..(why yees, I think I do)
Scriabin- you're screwed man, SCREWED!
Edgar - *gasp*I luv youu too!1
Scriabin - u gonna die- HE'S A GONNA KILL U
Johnny - *shove*
Edgar - ahh- *spat*
This relationship is rather screwy... (who'd a thunk it?)
4/30/2008 c1 4Rainbow-man
this was my FAVORITE story ever! Oh man, the ending was AMAZING! I LOVEDIT! You write amazingly, and all of the stories I've read of yours are SO clever and SO in-character! Really, i would marry you in a heart beat. This story... was amazing. I love you.
4Rainbow-manthis was my FAVORITE story ever! Oh man, the ending was AMAZING! I LOVEDIT! You write amazingly, and all of the stories I've read of yours are SO clever and SO in-character! Really, i would marry you in a heart beat. This story... was amazing. I love you.
4/14/2008 c1 7BarkingPup
Ah, I love the way you portray Johnny and Edgar. No OOC here, for sure. The idea of Nny/Edgar is so farfetched yet so plausible at the same time.. your writing just makes it so much more REAL and alive...
Jeez, I sound like a raving fan. Um, yeah I love your writing, don't stop or I will learn the ways of the hacker and hunt you down... :P
7BarkingPupAh, I love the way you portray Johnny and Edgar. No OOC here, for sure. The idea of Nny/Edgar is so farfetched yet so plausible at the same time.. your writing just makes it so much more REAL and alive...
Jeez, I sound like a raving fan. Um, yeah I love your writing, don't stop or I will learn the ways of the hacker and hunt you down... :P
7/12/2007 c1 anonentity
Oh my god... I love that last line. "Johnny, without any hesitation, pushed him off the car and over the cliff." That's twisted. A beautiful and altogether horrifying ending. I laughed.
Oh my god... I love that last line. "Johnny, without any hesitation, pushed him off the car and over the cliff." That's twisted. A beautiful and altogether horrifying ending. I laughed.
12/22/2005 c1 11Snapped Chopstick
... D=
If you end Vargas like this, I will KEEL YOO DED. Well, not really. I just so badly want some sort of CONTENTMANT for these two. X3
But, uh. Yeah. Very good. You rock, as per usual.
11Snapped Chopstick... D=
If you end Vargas like this, I will KEEL YOO DED. Well, not really. I just so badly want some sort of CONTENTMANT for these two. X3
But, uh. Yeah. Very good. You rock, as per usual.
12/6/2005 c1 Zero
ah!
he died in the end!
no!
ah!
he died in the end!
no!
8/29/2005 c1 30animeninjaNIPPON
awesome. This story is incredibly in-character, with Nny immortalizing the moment like that and all.
I know you get this alot in reviews, but...YOUR WRITING IS TRULY AMAZING!
30animeninjaNIPPONawesome. This story is incredibly in-character, with Nny immortalizing the moment like that and all.
I know you get this alot in reviews, but...YOUR WRITING IS TRULY AMAZING!
8/21/2005 c1 Fareem
You killed Edgar!. . .
(please dont end Vargas like that T_T)
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You killed Edgar!. . .
(please dont end Vargas like that T_T)
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12/1/2004 c1 6QOTSAfreak
I found the ending to be quite hilarious... I don't know why. Dark humor I guess...
6QOTSAfreakI found the ending to be quite hilarious... I don't know why. Dark humor I guess...