
2/18/2004 c1
1dfourthhorseman
Really great story. Its nice to see a long chapter that is as well written as this. I really hope you continue this fic, I really like these type of stories thats like the original but with a distinct twist. This looks like its going to be long fic, I hope it continues to be long and good as the first chapter, please don't be discouraged if you think there isn't enough reviews, because I really think its a good story you got going here. I can't wait to see how you'll fit more SquallxRinoa soon.
Btw, I think Zone really has it bad since every fic that includes him seems to only give him a short scene and a cursed case of diahiera. :P

Really great story. Its nice to see a long chapter that is as well written as this. I really hope you continue this fic, I really like these type of stories thats like the original but with a distinct twist. This looks like its going to be long fic, I hope it continues to be long and good as the first chapter, please don't be discouraged if you think there isn't enough reviews, because I really think its a good story you got going here. I can't wait to see how you'll fit more SquallxRinoa soon.
Btw, I think Zone really has it bad since every fic that includes him seems to only give him a short scene and a cursed case of diahiera. :P
2/14/2004 c1 Lupin IV
This revision didn't fix the main problem I had with the original, which was the formatting (specifically, dialog written with multiple speakers jammed into one paragraph). So in that regard it's no better than it was originally.
This revision didn't fix the main problem I had with the original, which was the formatting (specifically, dialog written with multiple speakers jammed into one paragraph). So in that regard it's no better than it was originally.
2/14/2004 c1 crazy
Ah! Cliff hanger!
Please update soon!
I really like this story ^_^
Ah! Cliff hanger!
Please update soon!
I really like this story ^_^
2/14/2004 c1 DBH
Nice beginning, though Rinoa better start wearing sunglasses if she's going to go all redeyed on Squall. :-)
Nice beginning, though Rinoa better start wearing sunglasses if she's going to go all redeyed on Squall. :-)