5/25/2005 c28 Rhiannon
*Gapes in horror* What? You're leaving it off there? No!

Lol. Okay, what am I confused about...? Let's see if I can explain it to myself... I guess the thing that I'm really confused about is the situation with Kino and Ryukotsusei. Ryu is sleeping, but is still somehow manipulating power...? And Kino is in power, but he's really not, and he's Ayame's father, but he's really not... Or something. That's confusing.

Also, who put the sink on Matsuro? And was Tsukikage Mikomi's husband? And how was Kouga related to her? And who was the dude in the other-world with Mischa?

Okay, I'm gonna stop asking questions now. Great chapter, by the way... For someone who says they can't do action scenes, you're remarkably good at them.

-Rhiannon

5/5/2005 c2 69DrakeyC
It's stories like this that really harness the true potential of the show, with the time travel and all. I'm gonna keep reading. And I hope it's Inu/Kags, cause after skimming through a story that turned out to be Sess/Kags and Inu/Kik, I need relief.

4/24/2005 c27 Rhiannon
I am so confused now... I guess this is another one of those stories that I'm gonna have to see through to the end and then read over again. But of course, just during the part that starts to make sense, you end the chapter. *Sigh* I hate cliff-hangers...

Awesome two chapters, 'cause this review is for both of them. Very, very good.

Keep up the amazing work!

-Rhiannon

4/21/2005 c5 5Kotori Susayski
Very interesting story, please countine it!

3/8/2005 c24 Sigari-sama
Guilty of reading all and reviewing none!

I found this story about a month ago, read everything you had posted, and then got sick (stupid flu) and forgot about it...didn't even add it to my favorites. Tonight, as I wandered about, I found it again! I'm so glad! You have done an AMAZING job of creating a believable world. From the first chapter till now, it works! (Though I must admit sometimes I get a little confused, but hey! That just means you're doing a great job of weaving an elaborate piece that takes awhile to comprehend. Much better than reading something that a 5th grader could come up with.)

Each and every character, both borrowed and original, seems true and unshakable. They are concrete and perfect in their imperfections. Have I mentioned you're awesome?

As for this latest chapter, the part with the split Mischa started to confuse me. I read it again, then again, and I think I'm understanding what's going on there. So I won't complain about the vagueness, because I like it. Plus, the scene with Kagome arguing with, and subsequently slapping, Inuyasha tore me up good! Having him be so loud, obnoxious, and blunt with such a painful subject made me pause, nod, and say "Yep. That's him." Ouch. Kagome is like her mother, ready to believe and defend the best possible explanation/reasoning, and the way the scene played out had me leaning forward in my chair. Then to have the vision of the truth come crashing in on her! Ooh! Brutal! Yea for Inuyasha, in the vision and now (glad we have Souta to show for his dismissal, though)! Yea for Kagome breaking down and sobbing into his shirt! Yea for InuKaggie goodness that isn't threatening to destroy the plot lines or the enamel of my teeth! Ah...

I'm rambling. Sorry. I'm looking forward to seeing how you play the rest of this out. You are quite talented, and I am grateful you're sharing your abilities with us in such a gracious manner. Hopefully I'll be able to give helpful critiques in the future.

- Sigari-sama

1/25/2005 c23 2Abbakdabba
Rather good story you've written here. Unfortunately, I do believe it has some addictive properties. I stayed up an entire night avoiding homework and reading this. Not to fear, my prof. luckily did not test us as he promised, so no harm in not reading Medea. I really like how you've fleshed out your characters. Question though: How did Inuyasha get off Goshinboku? Or did you cover that and I just missed it due to the lack of sleep? Is that even how you spell Goshinboku? Ah well, anyhow, keep up the good writing.

1/14/2005 c22 Nabob
Ah, what happens next? (I know, I'm so late - and it will probably take me another two weeks to read chapter twenty-two as well...)

So what's going to happen with Yoshi and Fuki, I wonder? I still wonder if Mischa will ever get herself out of this human state Kagome's trapped her in. My memory's a little spotty, is Mischa still unconscious and in that place? I'll have to go back and check some time...

Interesting last scene, although a lot of the time I was wondering what was going on (in terms of actions), and it was a little hard to picture the scene of the destroyed farm itself.

I would have thought Kagome's response to the farm's destruction would have been a bit more emotional, she seemed extremely calm for the situation. I thought what she was doing with the dead souls was very interesting, but she seemed greatly experienced in the matter. Until this time, has Kagome had very much exposure to dead souls?

Again, just my opinion, but I must also commend you on your dialogue. It's a great strong point in your writing and it feels just so in-character and REAL. Love it.

Anyway, when I have the time, I'll read and review the next chapter. :)

P.S. Already read the A/N of the next chapter, and here are some good sites that I always use when looking for Japanese names:

- this one is female names only.

- same site, except this page is all male names.

- another good name site, with both boy and girl names.

- more names, again both boy and girl.

- another name site also applying to both genders.

- and this one, if you're interested, is a list of Japanese surnames, if your own list ever runs short.

Hope these help, enjoy!