for One Wish6/16/2004 c1 akiartemis
Different story... not the same everything-is-great... i like it, plz continue
Different story... not the same everything-is-great... i like it, plz continue
6/16/2004 c5 chalicity
the characters are all so wonderfully painted and created! i love inu-yasha's speech, hehe. ^^ very original and well-written!
the characters are all so wonderfully painted and created! i love inu-yasha's speech, hehe. ^^ very original and well-written!
6/16/2004 c5 
8Sharibet
"Fuck you, Sesshoumaru."
- "That won't be necessary, little brother. I can find women to do that." -
Inu-Yasha slammed the phone back down in its cradle. 'Now there's some imagery I never wanted to think about.'
Whe! I was laughing myself silly over the Inuyasha-Sesshoumaru interaction in this scene-wonderful!
And the plot thickens...have to say that this is one of most original fanfiction plots I've read so far, and I'm most curious to see where you're taking this story. In the meanwhile, great job and thanks for updating!
8Sharibet"Fuck you, Sesshoumaru."
- "That won't be necessary, little brother. I can find women to do that." -
Inu-Yasha slammed the phone back down in its cradle. 'Now there's some imagery I never wanted to think about.'
Whe! I was laughing myself silly over the Inuyasha-Sesshoumaru interaction in this scene-wonderful!
And the plot thickens...have to say that this is one of most original fanfiction plots I've read so far, and I'm most curious to see where you're taking this story. In the meanwhile, great job and thanks for updating!
6/16/2004 c4 Sharibet
Oh, cool! You updated! ::happy smile::
Very interesting chapter-I admire that you're allowing the reader to discover what's going on at the same pace that our poor confused Kagome is. Loved the revelation that Meirin is a wolf-hanyou...and Inuyasha showed up! And best of all, there's another chapter to go!
Oh, cool! You updated! ::happy smile::
Very interesting chapter-I admire that you're allowing the reader to discover what's going on at the same pace that our poor confused Kagome is. Loved the revelation that Meirin is a wolf-hanyou...and Inuyasha showed up! And best of all, there's another chapter to go!
5/5/2004 c3 Sharibet
Aha! Problem resolved-at least for me. As for poor Meirin and Kagome, I suspect their problems are just beginning...arson, suspicious characters tailing around...
Anyhow, you're off to a great start, and I'm looking forward to seeing where the rest of this story leads.
Aha! Problem resolved-at least for me. As for poor Meirin and Kagome, I suspect their problems are just beginning...arson, suspicious characters tailing around...
Anyhow, you're off to a great start, and I'm looking forward to seeing where the rest of this story leads.
5/5/2004 c1 Sharibet
Hm...there's something really weird going on here...the Author Alert email lists Chapter 3 as being "Telephone Conversations," but when I click the Chapter 3 link, the file that's displayed is the Prelude again. The review link is also disabled for chapter 3...can you please investigate? I'd like to read the next chapter! ::grin::
Hm...there's something really weird going on here...the Author Alert email lists Chapter 3 as being "Telephone Conversations," but when I click the Chapter 3 link, the file that's displayed is the Prelude again. The review link is also disabled for chapter 3...can you please investigate? I'd like to read the next chapter! ::grin::
3/28/2004 c2 Helen
What a great idea! Can't believe no one thought of it before... I'm very much looking forward to seeing what you'll do with it next.
Don't ask me why, I'm guessing "the voice" is Sesshomauru. Maybe its the "can't stand mortals" line that gives me that idea. On the other hand, it's rude enough to be our dog boy.
Now you have to write more to prove me wrong! I'll look forward to it.
What a great idea! Can't believe no one thought of it before... I'm very much looking forward to seeing what you'll do with it next.
Don't ask me why, I'm guessing "the voice" is Sesshomauru. Maybe its the "can't stand mortals" line that gives me that idea. On the other hand, it's rude enough to be our dog boy.
Now you have to write more to prove me wrong! I'll look forward to it.
3/28/2004 c2 Sharibet
Hi there,
Kristine Batey recommended this story over on the Hero21 listserv, and I can see why. You're off to a great start...and I love alternate-universe stories that begin at a "what if" point of departure from the series.
Good writing, wonderful premise, I hope you continue writing this because I'm really looking forward to seeing how it turns out!
Hi there,
Kristine Batey recommended this story over on the Hero21 listserv, and I can see why. You're off to a great start...and I love alternate-universe stories that begin at a "what if" point of departure from the series.
Good writing, wonderful premise, I hope you continue writing this because I'm really looking forward to seeing how it turns out!
3/27/2004 c2 4Kristine Batey
I missed this the first time around. Glad you got inspired to go on with it, because that one-shot was just dying to be a prologue to something bigger. I like the switch from the angst of the first part to the jaunty tone of the second one. You've got me intrigued.
BTW, you've got another multichapter lurking in that first part of the prologue. I know you've got a big story on your plate, and this might be something for later, but I'd really love to hear the story of Kikyo and Kagome working alone together to develop Kagome's powers and defeat Naraku. That's a great fanfic waiting to be written...
Bachan
4Kristine BateyI missed this the first time around. Glad you got inspired to go on with it, because that one-shot was just dying to be a prologue to something bigger. I like the switch from the angst of the first part to the jaunty tone of the second one. You've got me intrigued.
BTW, you've got another multichapter lurking in that first part of the prologue. I know you've got a big story on your plate, and this might be something for later, but I'd really love to hear the story of Kikyo and Kagome working alone together to develop Kagome's powers and defeat Naraku. That's a great fanfic waiting to be written...
Bachan
2/17/2004 c1 kokoro
I am so looking for ward to your naext chapter. This is excellently written and I hope you update soon.
I am so looking for ward to your naext chapter. This is excellently written and I hope you update soon.