for Rain3/4/2013 c1 BrunetteSamus
You are now on my favorite "Arthur" list. Finally! some one who can write as both human and space hero! :)
You are now on my favorite "Arthur" list. Finally! some one who can write as both human and space hero! :)
5/7/2007 c1 
4Wolf-Walrus
Dude, I have one word for you:
Awesome!
Seriously. I have NEVER read anything like this in my life.
Keep on Ficcing!
Wolf-Walrus
4Wolf-WalrusDude, I have one word for you:
Awesome!
Seriously. I have NEVER read anything like this in my life.
Keep on Ficcing!
Wolf-Walrus
12/17/2004 c1 10Sharonlover
Beautiful...this was an awesome little chappy. ^_^; you've seemed to have caught a glimpse into Samus' soft side. A side we unfortenutely seldom ever see.
I was hoping she would turn and give her name as she disappeared out the door :P
this was quite enjoyable
thank you,
10SharonloverBeautiful...this was an awesome little chappy. ^_^; you've seemed to have caught a glimpse into Samus' soft side. A side we unfortenutely seldom ever see.
I was hoping she would turn and give her name as she disappeared out the door :P
this was quite enjoyable
thank you,
12/11/2004 c1 6Talps
This is an amazing piece of writing. You create a great effect, you really captured my attention, it's great. This is better than half the books I've read! Keep writing! (i gotta go read this again!)
6TalpsThis is an amazing piece of writing. You create a great effect, you really captured my attention, it's great. This is better than half the books I've read! Keep writing! (i gotta go read this again!)
11/10/2004 c1 11Spooky2
Oh ...my... Wa! ;_; that was so sad. It's very good! I like it very much, but it was sad too. *sniff* Great job.
11Spooky2Oh ...my... Wa! ;_; that was so sad. It's very good! I like it very much, but it was sad too. *sniff* Great job.
10/30/2004 c1 Lupus1377
That was really, really good. You drew the reader in perfectly, and it's a piece that if it had been any longer, the length would have detracted from the experience. One of the best I've ever read.
That was really, really good. You drew the reader in perfectly, and it's a piece that if it had been any longer, the length would have detracted from the experience. One of the best I've ever read.
4/19/2004 c1 GieGie
AW MAN NO WAY! She needs to go back! They need to...man...that sucks lol, but this was a great story, very good piece, pointful even though it's not so long, and very reflective, I enjoyed it very much :)
AW MAN NO WAY! She needs to go back! They need to...man...that sucks lol, but this was a great story, very good piece, pointful even though it's not so long, and very reflective, I enjoyed it very much :)
4/3/2004 c1 Aran'sApprentice-Meahow
this was beautiful. i'm supposing the woman is samus; just thinking, it could've had the same effect with your own characters. but that's just me, and it really worked out well. once again, it was beautiful.
this was beautiful. i'm supposing the woman is samus; just thinking, it could've had the same effect with your own characters. but that's just me, and it really worked out well. once again, it was beautiful.
3/8/2004 c1 17Shadow Fox777
It's calm and quiet and really makes one think. YOu also seem to caper the moment very well. I like it. A bitter sweet ending as you said, but then that's how life can be sometimes. Bitter sweet.
17Shadow Fox777It's calm and quiet and really makes one think. YOu also seem to caper the moment very well. I like it. A bitter sweet ending as you said, but then that's how life can be sometimes. Bitter sweet.
2/17/2004 c1 11Insomniac By Choice
Very good piece there. But I'm sure you already knew that. Everything was good except that line about "may not be water running down your leg" seemed out of place, like it didn't match the rest. Other than that, basically flawless.
11Insomniac By ChoiceVery good piece there. But I'm sure you already knew that. Everything was good except that line about "may not be water running down your leg" seemed out of place, like it didn't match the rest. Other than that, basically flawless.
2/17/2004 c1 23The Jack of Spades
Ah, a nice little introspective piece that isn't overstated or longer than it should be. It was...perfect, and deep. And I loved it. Brava!
23The Jack of SpadesAh, a nice little introspective piece that isn't overstated or longer than it should be. It was...perfect, and deep. And I loved it. Brava!
2/17/2004 c1 Desert Lynx
Wow, this was good. It was nice to see when Samus was getting away from it all. It would've been nicer to release it on Valentine's Day, but oh, well. It was very nice.
Wow, this was good. It was nice to see when Samus was getting away from it all. It would've been nicer to release it on Valentine's Day, but oh, well. It was very nice.