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4/12/2005 c1 5Crimson Tearz
This is a very creative piece. I have read your H.O.D beginning and End and i must say they flow very nicely togethor. However, I have the same problem x_x, you might want to clarify your characters better, since characters like Jadey simply appears without previous reference. Other then that, great job! I would hope this piece will not end again with just one chapter like the others. Please continue!

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