
3/7/2004 c3 Aru
Another great chap! U really r settin urself up 4 a major fic here! Great stuff-keep this up!
Another great chap! U really r settin urself up 4 a major fic here! Great stuff-keep this up!
3/6/2004 c2
22BizzyLizzy
This is certainly getting very interesting, looking forward to reading more soon.

This is certainly getting very interesting, looking forward to reading more soon.
3/6/2004 c2 Aru
Well...u got my attention now! Keep chap's like this comin-plz?
Well...u got my attention now! Keep chap's like this comin-plz?
3/5/2004 c2
75macisgate
Whoa! I love this! What an awesome story. I love the turn this fic has taken. I was not suspecting that. Keep it coming. You're doing a great job. Wonderful writing!

Whoa! I love this! What an awesome story. I love the turn this fic has taken. I was not suspecting that. Keep it coming. You're doing a great job. Wonderful writing!
3/1/2004 c1 fizziks
This is a great start. Your descriptions and dialogue are very good. Now that you left me hanging I did my part and reviewed. Please post the next chapter soon.
This is a great start. Your descriptions and dialogue are very good. Now that you left me hanging I did my part and reviewed. Please post the next chapter soon.
3/1/2004 c1
11TubaPrincess
WOW! Yipes! I'm scared for her. This is extremely intriguing and I can't wait until you add on to this. It has great potential! :)

WOW! Yipes! I'm scared for her. This is extremely intriguing and I can't wait until you add on to this. It has great potential! :)
3/1/2004 c1
58Cathain Nottingham
Fantastic first chapter, you really set it up to have a terrific story planned out, I can't wait for more! Great job.

Fantastic first chapter, you really set it up to have a terrific story planned out, I can't wait for more! Great job.